Chapter 5

Teaser

You sat on your chair and placed your bag in front of you.

"Okay Hana, you'll be fine. Make friends, check!" You smiled. "Good grades, easy! stay out of trouble, i've never even been there!"

"Why are you talking to yourself?" You looked to your right and noticed your seatmate was actually talking to you.

"Uhm, it's a good excersise?" You smiled and watched him as he stared at you waiting for a proper answer. "Sorry, i'm a new student and i'm kinda nervous."

"Welcome to Head High then," He took his hand out and you shook it. "My name is Kwan."

"Hana." Hwan was handsome and was average in height. You could tell even when he was sitting.

"I think you'll find it bearable here." He said sarcastically.

The teacher came in and introduced himself as your advisor, Professor Du-Ho.

***

Your first two subject went well, you were even able to make good friends with Kwan.

"How are your classmates?" Ae Chan asked.

"Based on how they look, kind." You said. "I also made a new friend, Kwan."

"Ah Kwan, he's nice to everyone you know." She said. "You better watch out though."

"why?"

"His girlfriend is always suspicious of him." She point at the cute, small girl beside Kwan. "Her name is Mi-Cha, she may look innocent and all, but inside she's a devil just like Eun and Ginger."

"Who's Eun and Ginger?"

"Her bestfriends," Again, she pointed out two other girls." Eun has a thing for Tae-Hyun, and Ginger...she's just plain stupid."

You looked at Eun an realized that she was the girl you asked to call Ae Chan this morning, the one with the make up and fake lashes. Ginger looked sweet and trying hard to be like Eun.

"A lot of people must like Eun." You said.

"Yeah, a lot of people hate her too. She's plastic!" Ae Chan loved to make fun of other people when she wasn't in the mood to not talk.

***

You and Ae Chan walked to the garden and sat on one of the benches. You ate while watching a group of boys skateboarding around when you realized that one of them(which you remembered also being your classmate) was using your skateboard. You knew because one of its wheels had Jae-Suns signature on it.

"Hey, that's my skateboard!" You set your food aside and bloacked his way.

"Oh, sorry." He returned it to you.

"Where did you get this?"

"It was just lying on the floor in the classroom, I was going to find the owner after using it." Tae -Hyun cam from behind him.

"Is something wrong, Min-Ki?" He asked.

"I found the owner of the crappy skateboard." They both laughed. Crappy? Did he just call my baby crappy?

You looked at Ae Chan and sae that she was giving you a signal that this was a bad idea and that you had to go, but you refused.

"My skateboard isn't crappy, for your information." You said firmly. 

"You board?" Tae-Hyun smiled.

"Obviously," You raised up your board. "Why then would I be bringing this if I didn't? idiots."

Suddenly the expressions on their faces changed. You wished that you could go back in time and said something else aside from idiot.

"That was a wrong step you took there," Tae-Hyun pushed Min-Ki aside and faced you. "You better watch yourself new kid."

You took a step back and decided to let him win.

"Let's go Ae Chan, this boy is just wasting our time." You pulled your friends and walked away.

"Wasting your time?" Tae-Hyun and his friends laughed. "No way kid, I think your the one who's crossed our turf!"

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BadOppa
#1
I would say the first paragraph is about as much as you would need for a description. Maybe trim it down a bit and add something more enquiring.

The rest is just basically stating the characters and their personalities—which is something you don't want.

Mention where the people are from—group-wise.

Add tags like the characters name. "Romance" instead of "koreanromance".

Also, you use a lot of ellipsis (…). Careful with those. So, don't use them as often.

Another important thing! Have you planned out your story? If not, you should delete this one.

Plan your story out and then after you find the perfect title and description (and you've written all your chapters), you can repost it again.
It avoids mainly writers block and late updates.
Hope this helped. :)