Chapter 19

Teaser

You were excited. It was the first time you baked a good cake. Good enough, that is. 

"I hope Ms. Bae would like this," Ms. Bae really helped you a lot with your subjects, she's the guidance councelor incharge of highschool students. "You tasted it right mom?"

"It's delicious honey, she will love it." You mom said. Though you couldn't tell whether she was lying or not.

"I'll be going now."

You went outside and refused to use your skateboard just incase you might fall, you wouldn't want to ruin the cake.

"What's that for?" Ae Chan asked.

"Ms. Bae."

"I didn't know you see Ms.Bae."

"Only a few times, but she's been really kind and has been helpding me a lot so..." You showed her the cake.

"Looks good."

"Really?" You smiled.

When you arrived school Ms. Bae was not in her office that morning so you took it to class with you and thought of bringing to her during break time.

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TAE-HYUNS POV

"Did you see what Hana was holding?" You wrapped your arms around In-Su and pointed at the new girl who was walking to her class.

"A box?"

"A box WITH cake inside, do you know what this means?" You grinned.

"she's not on a diet?" You hit your friend on the head.

"No you idiot, she's going to confess to me!" You walked to the comfort room and fixed your hair. "Wait a second...why am I doing this? I always look good." You smiled at your reflection and went outside.

Break time came and you've already made your classmates spread the news around. Hana was going to confess to you today.

"Seriously?" Eun laughed. "What a winnie, you are so going to dump it in her face aren't you?"

"Yup, that's the drill." You sat on the bench.

"Tae-Hyun!" You looked back and saw Ms. Bae. "Don't forget we have a meeting later after your classes."

"Yes ms. Bae." Ms.Bae was a guidance counselor. You found it annoying that counselors are always asking you personal questions. she went inside her office which was near the sidewalk of the garden.

"Ae Chan!" You turned and saw Hana hiding behind her friends back. Is she blushing? The students started to gether around you and blocked her way.

She looked confused at first, but froened when she saw you.

"I knew it." You said.

"What?" Idiot girl.

"Don't play dumb with me."

"I don't know what youre talking about Tae-Hyun but right now isn't the time to play games-" You pushed her on the wall and moved your face closer to hers.

"I said don't play dumb with me," You dodn't whisper, you wanted everyone to hear it. "You like me, you have a crush on me...thats why you brought that home made cake of yours that looks like crap." You laughed.

She looked at you in disbelief.

"But i'll take it anyways, its always a pleasure." You were about to take it, but she hid it behind her back.

"Is there something wrong with you? Are you mentally unstable to think I could ever like you?" You stumbled backward. What was she saying just now? "I'm sorry but I am not going to let myself get awed in your presence. You are nothing but an insenstive bastard, you fail at life and all aspects of being!." She said it all quickly that you didn't even have time to react before she splatted the cake on your face. "Eat that you !" she walked away.

"Did she just say that to Tae-Hyun?" "Nobody has ever said that..." "What a b**ch..." "She should go to hell.."

Who was this girl?

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Back to school, it will take a week before i can make one or two chapters:D

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BadOppa
#1
I would say the first paragraph is about as much as you would need for a description. Maybe trim it down a bit and add something more enquiring.

The rest is just basically stating the characters and their personalities—which is something you don't want.

Mention where the people are from—group-wise.

Add tags like the characters name. "Romance" instead of "koreanromance".

Also, you use a lot of ellipsis (…). Careful with those. So, don't use them as often.

Another important thing! Have you planned out your story? If not, you should delete this one.

Plan your story out and then after you find the perfect title and description (and you've written all your chapters), you can repost it again.
It avoids mainly writers block and late updates.
Hope this helped. :)