Chapter 12

Teaser

TAE-HYUNS POV

After the twins told you what happened you decided to call Mi-Cha.

"Tae-Hyun, why are you calling? si there a party at your placed?" She asked flirtatiously.

"Soon, but that's not why im calling." You grinned. "Your boyfriend is cheating on you."

"What?" She was pissed. "What the hell are you talking about? Kwan loves me."

It was a good thing your devilish mineons took pictures...well, one picture. You looked at the screen of the camera and observed the way their faces gave out the best of their smiles. She was holding a pink balloon and he was holding a blue one. You suddenly felt angry. Really angry. You gripped the camera tightly and grinned.

"Come to my house, i'll show you." You hung up and waited for Mi-Cha to arrive. While you were waiting you looked at the picture again. He likes her, how pathetic.

You needed Mi-Cha. She was mean, but she never was part of the red duty, unless it was her fight. So you had to make it hers.

The door opened after a while.

"You bastard, how dare you say he's cheating on me!" Mi-Cha jumped on you and started to strangle your throat. For a small girl she was really strong.

"Let go" You pushed her on the ground hard and threw the camera at her. "Here!"

You saw the rage in her face when she looked. She threw the camera on the wall.

"Kwan would never!" She said. "Their just out as friends...as friends."

"As friends?!" You screamed. "They are on a date, look at them!"

The balloons says a lot already!

There was a short pause as you watched her stare at nothing.

"What am I going to do?" she sat on the sofa and looked at you.

"The only thing you can do." You grinned.

She looked at you with sympathy and kissed you on the cheek missing your lips. You pushed her away.

"What the hell!" You wiped your cheek. 

"What?" 

"Not that you idiot!" You walked away from her.

"what the hell am I suppossed to do then huh?! You tell me!!!!" Rage. Rage. Rage.

You stopped walking and turned around to face her. "Fight."

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BadOppa
#1
I would say the first paragraph is about as much as you would need for a description. Maybe trim it down a bit and add something more enquiring.

The rest is just basically stating the characters and their personalities—which is something you don't want.

Mention where the people are from—group-wise.

Add tags like the characters name. "Romance" instead of "koreanromance".

Also, you use a lot of ellipsis (…). Careful with those. So, don't use them as often.

Another important thing! Have you planned out your story? If not, you should delete this one.

Plan your story out and then after you find the perfect title and description (and you've written all your chapters), you can repost it again.
It avoids mainly writers block and late updates.
Hope this helped. :)