Chapter 18

Teaser

HANAS POV

"Are you okay?" Kwan walked up to you during Lunch break. He knew you and Ae Chan stayed near the library.

"What made you decide to talk to her now?" Ae Chan glared.

"Ae Chan, it's okay." You said. "I'm fine."

"Good," There was a short pause. "I-"

"Kwan! What the hell are you doing there?get over here!" You heard Mi-Cha call.

"I have to go." Kwan walked away.

"Idiot boy." Ae Chan said as she took another bite from her sandwhich. 

"It's not his fault. If I was his girlfriend I would tell him the same thing." Actually, not really.

"Do you like him?" 

"NO!" You said too loud. "I mean, Ae Chan, I have Jae-Sun."

She raised an eyebrow and changed topic.

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School ended and you stayed for a while to do some research in the library. It was easier if you went to google, but you would rather look for the answers in books. You went around and took the big book of encyclopedia.

"Aha, here we go..."

"Here we go what?" Tae-Hyun appeared.

"Don' talk to me." You looked away.

"Why not?"

"Because we bearly even know each other. It's weird."

"Then let's get to know each other." You showed him a disgusted look. "Chill, I only want to know if your okay."

"Seriously?" He nodded. "Your an ."

"I know, but I have to do what I have to do."

"The things you do don't even make any sense."

"You'll regret that." He walked away.

You decided to ignore him and finallyt ook a seat.

"The road to..." You began reading. "Blocked by all means is what-"

CRASH!

"WOOHOO!" You heard boys shouting and running outside.

You looked back and saw that they toppled down one of the book shelves which cause all the other book shelves to fall like dominos. You were the only one in the library aside from the librarians.

"Who were those boys?!" The three librarians examined the room and called the guards and the principal.

"He's really getting on my nerves." You said to yourself as you walked out of the library.

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BadOppa
#1
I would say the first paragraph is about as much as you would need for a description. Maybe trim it down a bit and add something more enquiring.

The rest is just basically stating the characters and their personalities—which is something you don't want.

Mention where the people are from—group-wise.

Add tags like the characters name. "Romance" instead of "koreanromance".

Also, you use a lot of ellipsis (…). Careful with those. So, don't use them as often.

Another important thing! Have you planned out your story? If not, you should delete this one.

Plan your story out and then after you find the perfect title and description (and you've written all your chapters), you can repost it again.
It avoids mainly writers block and late updates.
Hope this helped. :)