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Of The Guardians: Inheritor [Being Made Into a Novel Series]
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He held up the book then. "I'm reading it to you for relax."
"Has it got any sports in it?"
"Fencing. Fighting. Torture. Poison. True love. Hate. Revenge. Giants. Hunters. Bad men. Good men. Beautifulest ladies. Snakes. Spiders... Pain. Death. Breave men. Cowardly men. Strongest men. Chases. Escapes. Lies. Truths. Passion. Miracles."
"Sounds okay," I said, and I kind of closed my eyes. 

- William Goldman, The Princess Bride 

 

There was a low rumble and the sound of growling. Warem reached for his sword. "The time hasssss come," hissed a voice. Warem now had his sword fully drawn. “Who goes there!?! In the name of the Kingdom of Ordea, I command you to reveal yourself!” Warem yelled. He heard a snarl from behind him.

“The Kingdom of Ordea? Hah! There will be no Kingdom of Ordea when the resssst of my brotherssss are releasssssed!” the voice chuckled. The wind picked up, making the sound echo through the trees so that Warem couldn't find the origin of the voice.

He was suddenly hit with a metal object and knocked to the ground. He looked to see someone he wish he haden’t. “Y-You! H-How did you get out of the gate?!?!” Warem stuttered in shock. The being hovered over him, flashing its green eyes at him.

“Dear Kalima, becaussse thissss isss the end for you, I sssshall grant you the ansssswer to your quessstion,” it said, a sly smile on its face as it lowered its head towards the ear of the Kalima. It whispered something, making Warem’s eyes widen and jaw drop. “You’re lying! There is no way that-”

“Oh, but my dear Kalima, it isss true! And jussst like you, your beloved Counc-ssil won’t know, until it’ssss too late.” It laughed as it grabbed Warem’s sword. Warem took one last look at the horrifying creature before it slit his throat.

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"Good... Good! Keep your form; don't lose your concentration," Ramulin said as you continued to focus on your illusion. You were creating a forest... for the third time. Your eyes were closed, and you quieted your mind. Creating illusions took complete concentration and will power.

You visualized the forest in your mind: the roots, the texture of the forest floor, the foliage. When you had finally completed the image in your mind, you deeply inhaled and placed both of your hands parallel in front of you.

You slowly began to open your eyes, making sure not to lose the image of the forest in your mind. As you did, the forest in your mind began to blend into your current surroundings. The waterfalls became large trees, and the other members of the tribe became rocks and plants. The bridge you were standing on became that damp, lush forest floor you pictured.

You looked at the opening of the forest, a large circle that served as a gateway out of the trees. There was something floating outside the opening. At first you thought it was the sun, but as you looked closer, you realized that it was oddly shaped.

"What is that?" you asked yourself. Just then, you felt something hard hit your forehead, knocking you onto the floor.

The illusion of the forest disappeared. You were now lying flat on the ground. “Ow!!! What the heck!?!?” you yelled as you turned your head towards a tall, black-haired boy. “Ramulin, aren’t Illusionists suppose to be concentrated at all times?” he snickered. “Yes, that is true, Erad. Kora, please learn how to deepen your focus,” Ramulin suggested to me as he grabbed his things and began to walk back to the village.

“But he threw a fist sized stone at my head!!! How am I supposed to ignore that?!?” you complained as you followed him, Erad lurking behind you two. Ramulin turned his head towards you as he continued walking.

“The strongest Illusio

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TheSilentScene
I literally never come on here, but yes, I am still writing the novel. I left this site because I wanted to write original content & someone on this site did something that made me feel unsafe. I hope you guys have grown into amazing people & that you've keep your love of reading & writing alive :)

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EricaKpopLove
#1
Chapter 100: its Dec 2023. life comes by so fast lol
i hope whoever reads this is doing great!
still thinking about this story and waiting for the novel.
or news. thankyoooou again for making such a great story
TheSilentScene
#2
I literally never come on here, but yes, I am still writing the novel. I left this site because I wanted to write original content & someone on this site did something that made me feel unsafe. I hope you guys have grown into amazing people & that you've keep your love of reading & writing alive :)
ackerwoman
#3
Chapter 5: I'm having flashbacks when EXOtics is mentioned above. Good old time.
miaka07 #4
hi..how are you?..just wondering if you have any updates on the novel?..sorry to ask..i just suddenly miss your story..thank u and hope ur doing good.. ?
winterphantom #5
Chapter 100: Will definitely support this upcoming book of yours! I would love for it to be an actual paperback/hardbound book, but if South East Asia is too far, then I wouldn't really mind an e-book. Can't wait to how this wonderful story of yours unfold! xoxo
laemh123
#6
Chapter 50: I'm so excited for when this gets finished this is like the 10th time I've read it!
EricaKpopLove
#7
Chapter 100: Chapter 78: Hiiiii, im from canada!
A hard/paperback copy would be amazing

I literally spent all last year of middle school reading this! Uugh im so excited

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! Thaankyoou
kachinggu
#8
Chapter 2: it is so rare to find this kind of fantasy stories here!

giving u this before i jump right into the story, hope u like it!
https://i.imgur.com/mJLmPxt.jpg
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Clamz17
#9
Chapter 100: Congrats on finishing undergrad! I’m from the US and would love a copy of your story :) i’d Probably get the ebook just cause I don’t have much time to go and visit a book store nowadays