How you remind me

The Wish of Existence
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It was 8pm and Kyungsoo was nearing his home. It was in moments like these that he regretted moving into a house placed atop a hill. The mild teen came to understand that dancing was indeed one of the urban boy's passion, besides irritating him. He also came to understand that he wasn't as fit as he perceived himself to be. The upward path to his home was now tenfold more difficult by the soreness in his body. He may have a simpler part in the choreography, but Sehun was not one to skimp on detail and aim for perfection.

 

Upon arriving in his doorstep, he ruffled through his pockets for his keys.

“Huh, where are they... ?” he questioned himself aloud, assured that he himself placed them in his coat's left pocket. Upon running his finger around the ample square of the fabric, he came to feel the reason his keys magically disappeared, “Oh, shoot, there's a hole in my pocket.” Kyungsoo scooped the left side of his coat, feeling the keys trapped between the fabrics, and with his fingers, grabbed the keyrings through the opening in his coat pocket. He fished them out and lamented the state of his coat.

“It is an old coat,” he reasoned, convincing himself to abstain from getting a new one, aware winter coats are pricey, “and spring is coming soon. I'll soon swap it with my jumpers...” he shrugged his problem off.

He inserted the key on the upper lock and then the lower lock before pushing the door, greeted by a rather miffed-looking Sooyeon.

 

“Goo – good evening, Sooyeon-noona... ?” Kyungsoo carefully greeted, unsure as to whether he had done something wrong to cause his sister to look like she had been slapped, “Everything okay... ?”

“Where have you been?” asked the elder, crossing her arms and glaring at her younger brother.

Inquietude settled in Kyungsoo, unsure of whether there was a prior responsibility he had to attend to and completely forgot, taken by the rushing flow that was Sehun's inconvenient plan.

“I was rehearsing...” the fair student's pupils dashed from side to side, desperate to find a fib that would defuse the situation “with... er... a friend... ?“

 

'Oh good going, me, you just told the worst lie; the truth!' he mentally cussed himself, having actually told the truth.

 

“What?” the eldest looked confused, “rehearse what, I thought you quit the drama club.

Kyungsoo sighed, realising that no amount of thespianism could save him from being a bad fib-teller, “My new friend Sehun entered us for the Harvest Festival show.”

“Your new friend? The blond boy that Soojung's been talking about?”

The younger sibling nodded, “he was adamant that I be a part of it,” he pouted, feeling the slight discomfort at acknowledging that he'd stand in front of the town, to perform, whereas he was used to a small sized auditorium, and not an open air show “specially since we're representing his family's business.”

“Oh, I see... well, it's good that you're doing something,” stated Sooyeon, taking a more relaxed stance, “since you quit the club, and you don't have work today, I was worried that you would be wandering about town 'till the late hours of the day.”

“Is that why you were angry?” asked Kyungsoo taken aback by his sibling's sudden change.

“I was not angry, I was worried!” exclaimed the eldest, offended that her concern would be taken as a form of retaliation, “ever since Chanyeol and Luhan left, you've been looking worse every day, and I was worried!”

“But I'm fine - “

“Kyungsoo,” the eldest rose her index finger in warning “those are the exact words I don't want to hear right now,” Kyungsoo quickly sealed his lips and stared at his elder sister wide-eyed “because I am certain I am not going to believe them.”

“Noona, I miss them, and I am not hearing from them, no e-mails, or calls, or anything. Before, I managed to hear from them at least once a day, now? It's as if they don't exist. It hurts, and I'm trying to understand. I'm managing, if that sounds better.”

The eldest sighed, settling her often, stern-yet-neutral expression into a comforting smile, content to hear her brother's worries without a third party involved, “you'll be happy to know that they haven't forgotten you, at all.”

“How do you know that?” replied a bitter, upset Kyungsoo.

“Because a package just arrived from Seoul.” Sooyeon announced to her younger brother.

“...Seoul?” Kyungsoo's eyes lit up with excitement, and lips slowly curved into upward crescents at the news.

“I think you know who sent it.” She said, directed her thumb to the living room.

 

The modest male teen quickly unshed his coat and bag and left them by the entrance as he dashed to the living room. As stated by his sister, a medium-sized, brown carton box was placed atop the coffee table.

Sat on the sofa, Soojung noticed her brother's dash towards the box, and said “it arrived this afternoon, but there was no one to collect. Unnie and I went to the post office before they closed.”

Kyungsoo was swift to remove the brown tape and pry open the lids to see the contents. Within he saw white papers enveloping the item inside. He carefully began removing the papers and untangling them from the item. Inside, he saw a big square of black fabric and an envelop. He t

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floralnori
#1
Chapter 29: Thanks for another great chapter! Kyungsoo is so lucky in his friendships. He doesn't have many friends, but the ones he has are so loyal and supportive and really only want the best for him. I'm glad he let Sehun into his life. And he actually seemed to listen, understand, and take what Sehun had to say to heart. I can't wait for their performance. They're going to show everyone!
floralnori
#2
Chapter 24: Kyungsoo keeps surprising, sometimes even shocking me. When he started shouting at Jongin, I actually had to step away from my computer for a moment. I knew the hallway was still filled with students on their way to class, and I didn't know what would happen next. And then Kyungsoo surprised me. Instead of curling into a ball of fear, he straightened his back and talked back to those that could hurt him. He's so brave in that moment. Great job, author-nim!
0818420
#3
Chapter 23: I think.......Sehun is Luhan's boyfriend???is it? Or just my lala imagination.... Lalalala...
bloodywidow #4
Chapter 19: T_T kyungsoo broke my heart when he ran from the library and broke down alone his walls are collapsing over him. I hope that something good happens to him...like finding a something he's passionate about again or a purpose for his life rather than wilting away for his sisters. Since his 2 best friends are gone, kyungsoo's time with jongin and kris is going to be more concentrated? can't wait to see how that goes!! at the end when you described him losing his wings .. I couldn't help but think of a fallen angel's image...will he change to the better/worse or will people change for him ? ahhh to many questions XDD
floralnori
#5
Chapter 17: I am so glad that Kyungsoo sat down and properly thought about how his actions and beliefs (trying to protect everyone, being their martyr) was affecting his friends and family. Actually he was a lot like Jongin in the last chapter not recognizing the power he has over others. I loved Kyungsoo's wishes for Chanyeol and Luhan. The one for Chanyeol was a little bossy but Luhan's was pure gold. I'm really glad they went through. :)
bloodywidow #6
Chapter 15: *spoiler*

REALLY interested in seeing how things develop between Kyungsoo and kris! Because of YOU and your “Long before I was yours” XD they are becoming my second favorite after kaisoo XD
If ANYTHING, this fiction, specially the acting parts in the theater, makes me wish you would do an alternative universe/magic/ dark world! I also wrote that while commenting in another fiction of yours and here I say it again…your way of writing is very regal and majestic that suits the older periods ..

English is not my first language but I hoped I conveyed my feeling and thoughts the right way .. and as always LOVE your art .. UPDATE as soon as you can XD!!!

P.S. the tag said comedy? Soooo.. is that a typo or the comedy is still to come?
bloodywidow #7
Chapter 15: *spoiler*

Nothing is for free in life...I’m afraid of that the rectangular mobile… "Lay" gave me the creeps and I'm afraid for Kyungsoo. It, in away, reminded me of death note... instead of the death you have a wish but at what cost? Does it really grant wishes or is it a mere coincidence? I hope that you focus more on abnormal part of the fiction… it gives it a different feel … but if that isn’t what you planned, that is okay too ^_^

I don't like the sisters... soojuung’s selfishness gets on my nerves...she is a huge reason why they are suffering… she can go to kyungsoo's school instead of that elite one but she chooses not to! She also knew Kyungsoo have the habit of skipping lunch for her and her sister and yet stayed quite. She also helps him get night shifts although the older sister specifically asked them not to.
The older sister is a non-factor to me in this story ..refusing soojung working in the 24/7 market but agreeing to let kyungsoo work is beyond me >.<'

how did luhan get kyungsoo's number? Maybe he is the one who bought it and gave it to lay to give it to Kyungsoo?

If jongin is going to fall in love with Kyungsoo, and he will XD, it is not going to be because of a wish.. he was taken the moment Kyungsoo lifted his gaze and acted! That is what shock and frightened him. I really don’t mind what he said to Kyungsoo ..everyone is entitle to their own opinion but shouldn’t act upon it to hurt anyone!
floralnori
#8
Chapter 14: I am so loving the bromance between the three boys. Luhan and Chanyeol accept Kyungsoo as he is, just as he accepts them. Which makes Jongin's narrow mindedness that much harder to stomach. My guts churned when he said it was wrong for boys to like each other and assumed Kyungsoo wasn't gay. Kyungsoo is so brave in that moment when he corrects him and admits that he is. His heart is breaking and he's still true to himself. :) Awesome.
floralnori
#9
Chapter 13: I am really enjoying this story! I love the combination of hyper emotional reality and magical realism. I always feel like I'm right inside of Kyungsoo as he experiences this world that's almost completely out of his control even with a wish-granting app. I am so glad he has his strong friendships with Chanyeol and Luhan. I am so confused by Jongin's almost dead reaction to Kyungsoo at the end of this chapter. Did the wish backfire and cause their emotional connection to self-destruct? I can't wait for the next chapter!
IMAGINEBYDRAGONS #10
Chapter 11: It's such a shame this story doesn't get the recognition it deserves. This is such a great story..sorry for the lack of vocabulary, I ran out of words to say. You deserved an upvote from me :)