Analytical Endeavour

The Wish of Existence
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“So...” the blond statuesque friend spoke, holding his burger with his two large hands, “you skipped the last classes of the day.” he stated, eyeing his friends for a moment before taking a big bite of his food.

“And,” added another voice to the conversation, “that you shouted that you like to men.”

“Okay, first of all,” declared the person in question “Sehun, why are you here?” Kyungsoo directed the question to the blond boy sat to his right, at the booth of the local burger place, “second,” he turned left, to Yifan, yet another blond “it's because after I said that I panicked and ran to the bike sheds.”

Sehun then put his two cents into the conversation “I'll have you know I met Yifan in the Central Plaza and tagged along when he said food.”

“Glutton...” murmured Kyungasoo, rolling his eyes.

 

To the outside, people would never suggest that the three were friends, with their differences so apparent – Yifan still donning his basketball uniform, Kyungsoo his work uniform, and Sehun being a vibrant city soul fashionista; with his high brand backwards cap, his peace-symbol-stamped hoodie, tight black jeans and shiny high tops. It all seemed to clash, yet there they were, discussing away the troubling news that had travelled around the school.

 

“Why always the bike sheds?” Yifan asked himself that question, “Anyway, I expect this'll explode tomorrow, considering who you said it to...” Yifan leered into the contents of his burger, inspecting for pickles.

“I thought it'd have exploded already...” the smaller of the three sighed.

“Who did you say it to?” wondered Sehun, after gulping his milkshake noisily “Gossip never specified.”

“Kim Jongin.” both Kyungsoo and Yifan answered in unison, both with forlorn tones to their voices.

“Preppy? Huh, with his popularity, you just picked a person ripe for the top of the gossip, didn't you, Soo?”

“Okay,” Kyungsoo straightened up, then pointed a poignant finger at the city body “don't call me Soo, you don't know me that way, Sehun. And besides, it's his fault! He kept pushing me and pushing me!”

“...What is it this time?” asked a not-so interested Yifan, with a bland voice and helping himself to the fries placed at the middle of the table.

Kyungsoo glared at the tone of his friend's voice “Why do you say it like that, Yifan?”

“Sorry, but whenever I hear your name and Jongin's it's always some disagreement that had gone out way out control. Like when you made him upset when you ignored him, people were ready to call you arrogant and a whole of a lot worse things.”

“But we ended up resolving this!” exclaimed Kyungsoo, unhappy to hear such quick assumptions from people's opinion on his situation with Jongin, “we agreed that we'd try to be friends.”

“Oh, so Preppy gets the special treatment, and I get called out all the time? Specially when he annoyed you to the point that you had to blurt out something like that? You really ain't fair, 'Soo'.” The city boy emphasised the syllables of the unwanted nickname by mousing his lips and extending the vowels.

“Argh...” Kyungsoo grumbled, unable to find a justifiable reason as to why he was biased for Jongin, without the unnecessary teasing he'd get for crushing on the top ranker.

Yifan leant forwards on the table, addressing Sehun in loud whisper “It's by his teasing that you can tell he likes you already.”

“Oh, is that so, then, okay!” Sehun shrugged, returning to grinning at the deliciousness of his milkshake.

“Yifan, you and your loud mouth, seriously,” Kyungsoo shook his head, “back to the topic at hand, I'd suggest you two stay away from me in school for a while.”

“Why?” queried Yifan, confused.

“Well, in fear of retribution, or correction or whatever gay bashers do.”

“Oh no,” Sehun feverent shook his head, placing his milkshake on the table and crossing his arms, continuing to deny Kyungsoo's poor attempts at reassutance, “I'm sticking with you. Maybe then I can fish out the 'phobes and I can deal with them. I don't want them to ruin my time here with their narrow-minded views.”

“Why, did you deal with them back in the city?”

Sehun nodded, “look, I'm not like you, so you know, I can't truly appreciate what it is you going through, but, I will not say I've never experimented. It's no big deal. But when you start being intolerant, violent and downright idiotic for the stupidest reason, my knuckle rings come out.”

Yifan stared at the city boy with wide eyes, slowly retracting away from the table “...knuckle rings?” asked the hesitant basketball player.

“You think I got involved in bar frights without protection?” asked Sehun rhetorically. He balled his right hand into a fist and kissed his knuckles, “these babies have struck more cheeks and stomachs than Americans have struck oil. ”

“What a horrible comparison...” murmured Kyungsoo to himself, “Yeah, no, no knuckle rings, and no taking out those babies, Oh. I don't want this to escalate into a morality war, or a religious one. Just... you know, ignore them.”

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floralnori
#1
Chapter 29: Thanks for another great chapter! Kyungsoo is so lucky in his friendships. He doesn't have many friends, but the ones he has are so loyal and supportive and really only want the best for him. I'm glad he let Sehun into his life. And he actually seemed to listen, understand, and take what Sehun had to say to heart. I can't wait for their performance. They're going to show everyone!
floralnori
#2
Chapter 24: Kyungsoo keeps surprising, sometimes even shocking me. When he started shouting at Jongin, I actually had to step away from my computer for a moment. I knew the hallway was still filled with students on their way to class, and I didn't know what would happen next. And then Kyungsoo surprised me. Instead of curling into a ball of fear, he straightened his back and talked back to those that could hurt him. He's so brave in that moment. Great job, author-nim!
0818420
#3
Chapter 23: I think.......Sehun is Luhan's boyfriend???is it? Or just my lala imagination.... Lalalala...
bloodywidow #4
Chapter 19: T_T kyungsoo broke my heart when he ran from the library and broke down alone his walls are collapsing over him. I hope that something good happens to him...like finding a something he's passionate about again or a purpose for his life rather than wilting away for his sisters. Since his 2 best friends are gone, kyungsoo's time with jongin and kris is going to be more concentrated? can't wait to see how that goes!! at the end when you described him losing his wings .. I couldn't help but think of a fallen angel's image...will he change to the better/worse or will people change for him ? ahhh to many questions XDD
floralnori
#5
Chapter 17: I am so glad that Kyungsoo sat down and properly thought about how his actions and beliefs (trying to protect everyone, being their martyr) was affecting his friends and family. Actually he was a lot like Jongin in the last chapter not recognizing the power he has over others. I loved Kyungsoo's wishes for Chanyeol and Luhan. The one for Chanyeol was a little bossy but Luhan's was pure gold. I'm really glad they went through. :)
bloodywidow #6
Chapter 15: *spoiler*

REALLY interested in seeing how things develop between Kyungsoo and kris! Because of YOU and your “Long before I was yours” XD they are becoming my second favorite after kaisoo XD
If ANYTHING, this fiction, specially the acting parts in the theater, makes me wish you would do an alternative universe/magic/ dark world! I also wrote that while commenting in another fiction of yours and here I say it again…your way of writing is very regal and majestic that suits the older periods ..

English is not my first language but I hoped I conveyed my feeling and thoughts the right way .. and as always LOVE your art .. UPDATE as soon as you can XD!!!

P.S. the tag said comedy? Soooo.. is that a typo or the comedy is still to come?
bloodywidow #7
Chapter 15: *spoiler*

Nothing is for free in life...I’m afraid of that the rectangular mobile… "Lay" gave me the creeps and I'm afraid for Kyungsoo. It, in away, reminded me of death note... instead of the death you have a wish but at what cost? Does it really grant wishes or is it a mere coincidence? I hope that you focus more on abnormal part of the fiction… it gives it a different feel … but if that isn’t what you planned, that is okay too ^_^

I don't like the sisters... soojuung’s selfishness gets on my nerves...she is a huge reason why they are suffering… she can go to kyungsoo's school instead of that elite one but she chooses not to! She also knew Kyungsoo have the habit of skipping lunch for her and her sister and yet stayed quite. She also helps him get night shifts although the older sister specifically asked them not to.
The older sister is a non-factor to me in this story ..refusing soojung working in the 24/7 market but agreeing to let kyungsoo work is beyond me >.<'

how did luhan get kyungsoo's number? Maybe he is the one who bought it and gave it to lay to give it to Kyungsoo?

If jongin is going to fall in love with Kyungsoo, and he will XD, it is not going to be because of a wish.. he was taken the moment Kyungsoo lifted his gaze and acted! That is what shock and frightened him. I really don’t mind what he said to Kyungsoo ..everyone is entitle to their own opinion but shouldn’t act upon it to hurt anyone!
floralnori
#8
Chapter 14: I am so loving the bromance between the three boys. Luhan and Chanyeol accept Kyungsoo as he is, just as he accepts them. Which makes Jongin's narrow mindedness that much harder to stomach. My guts churned when he said it was wrong for boys to like each other and assumed Kyungsoo wasn't gay. Kyungsoo is so brave in that moment when he corrects him and admits that he is. His heart is breaking and he's still true to himself. :) Awesome.
floralnori
#9
Chapter 13: I am really enjoying this story! I love the combination of hyper emotional reality and magical realism. I always feel like I'm right inside of Kyungsoo as he experiences this world that's almost completely out of his control even with a wish-granting app. I am so glad he has his strong friendships with Chanyeol and Luhan. I am so confused by Jongin's almost dead reaction to Kyungsoo at the end of this chapter. Did the wish backfire and cause their emotional connection to self-destruct? I can't wait for the next chapter!
IMAGINEBYDRAGONS #10
Chapter 11: It's such a shame this story doesn't get the recognition it deserves. This is such a great story..sorry for the lack of vocabulary, I ran out of words to say. You deserved an upvote from me :)