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Reviewer: Kissme6294

Title: Something Special

Author: Jongsica Forever

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Title [3/5 pts.]

The title is very plain and doesn’t give much away except well… there’s something special!

Poster/Graphics/Background [2/5 pts.]
There was no background or poster added, it was just a simple picture of Jessica and Jonghyun. Here’s some helpful advice for next time, get someone like myself to make a poster for you. Posters, backgrounds and other pictures grab the reader’s attention. If you’re going to use just normal pictures, use a different one each time.

Foreword/Description [4/10 pts.]
The description was very short, and clear about what the story was about. It would have been nice if it was a little more descriptive.

Plot [25/30 pts]
The plot was its usual rich guy at school falls in love with the new girl… but with a very unusual twist and I enjoyed that! 

Flow [3/5 pts]
It was somewhat at a fast pace like how within Jessica’s first few days of being there, Jonghyun and Jessica were together.

Characterization [5/5 pts]
You portrayed each character well, the main characters, the secondary characters. But I wish I saw more Taemin in the story

Grammar/Spelling [19/20 pts]
There were rarely any mistakes! But, this is what I’m really picky about; you need to start a new paragraph each time a new character speaks!!

Overall Enjoyment [20/20 pts]
I enjoyed this story very well! I woke up this morning to see this request, and so I spent my morning in bed reading the whole story…. I thought I would fall asleep but it was really good that I didn’t fall asleep! I’m definitely going to read the sequel so keep up the work!

 
Total [81/100]

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