Block B: The Last Girl Standing

by: lilymilktea

1. Title: [3/5 pts.]

uhmm.. the title of the story is an action genre.. but the story isnt so its really misleading your readers about it.. and what is the reason for Block B? sorry.. but i really dont get it..

2. Poster/Graphics/Background: [3/5 pts.]

your Poster is not that catchy to the eyes and the Background too.. sorry

3. Foreword/Description [10/10 pts.]

I really like your Foreword... its really catchy.. just change your background and main Pic to make it more cachy to the readers.. its just an advice.. :)

4. Plot [25/30 pts]

alot of authors are also using that plot... so its not really that original.. but i like it in a way that the twist and turns of your story.. it makes it more unique and intersting to the readers.. but if you'll stay in the current problem so long.. it MIGHT bore your readers.. and if you'll make it so fast to solve it then it will lose that intensity.. uhmm.. did you get me? hehe..

5. Flow [3/5 pts.]

the flow was ok 

6. Characterization [5/5 pts.]

it was great.. you really use them very well

7. Grammar/Spelling [20/20 pts.]

so far you didnt made a huge mistake.. so keep it up and also your using simple yet deep words.. simple that can be understand and deep that can express the characters' feelings.. 

8. Overall Enjoyment/Entertainment [15/20 pts.]

i enjoyed it but there already alot of authors who are doing this so its not really that intersting anymore..

Total:  [84/100]

you got 84! keep up the good work and i hope you'll use the review for your next chapter so that it will go out amazing.. ;)

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