Fire part II

Betrayed
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Taemin POV

"Onew... *coughcough* Taemin... where are you?... *cough* ONEW... TAEMIN!?" Jonghyun's voice... he's ok... few.

Onew grabbed my shoulder with his wrapped up hand slightly making me jump.

"We're ok... *cough*  I can't see a thing though... you guys go on!" Onew spoke, I couldn't catch my breath.

He was right, they should leave.

"We can't go without you... we won't!" Minho cried, if it wasn't for the heat burning our eyes I'm sure he would be in tears. It pains me to think of him like that.

"Shut up we'll be fine... JUST GO!" I shouted finding enough breath. Then regreted it as I fell to the floor gasping for breath. It was easier to catch my breath down here, less smoke.

I grabbed Onew's leg and pulled him down. I could tell he found it easier to breath because he wasn't gasping as much.

"Ok we'll get help!" Key helped and I heard footsteps leave us.

"We need light!" Onew said with urgency in his voice. He ran over to door nearby, avoiding the flames easily. For somone so clumsy he can be very graceful sometimes.

I followed him closely getting a small burn on my right knee. Even though the pain was up there with being hit in your manhood there was no sign of there even being a burn.

I caught up with Onew. He had got into someone's apartment and was now raiding the place for a torch or source of light. I ran over to the blackened windows and opened them as wide as possible. Smoke started to billow out making it hard to see out but a bit easier to see.

I looked down to see loads of people gathering to see our h

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Astronomer #1
Authornim! Your edit pic was so great! Youre such a senpai
emmyrose #2
Chapter 21: what...nooo come on there has gotta be more to this....taemin...i need to know what's gonna happen to my bias....plzzzzzzzz update!
OurLoveGoesOn
#3
Chapter 21: omg omg omg what happened!?!?!?!?!?
Cliff hanger~~
UPDATE SOON! <3
Lee_So_Yeong
#4
Chapter 21: OMG!! What happened to Taeminnie?! He was so close to getting out!!

I really love these updates~ They are amazing!
OurLoveGoesOn
#5
Chapter 20: Omg, you're back! Yay!
I loves this update.
Your story gets mysterious by the chapter~!
Update soon <3
Lee_So_Yeong
#6
Chapter 20: Waah!! An update! Thank you so much for updating~ And I hope Youngmin will be okay when he wakes up! I wonder who that man is and if he will be important later.. Hmm :T
OurLoveGoesOn
#7
Chapter 19: Omg!!!
You've finally update!
Omg, the man...it reminds me of 'The Slender Man' hahahaha well that's the image I got LOL
UPDATE SOON ♥
Lee_So_Yeong
#8
Chapter 19: YAAAAAAAY!! You are back! But if that guy hurts Taemin.. I will be SO angry!! Update soon author-nim~ I am really glad you are back~ ^^