Too Many Commas!
A Fan Fiction Writer's GuideOnly use commas when necessary.
Correct: Kris sighed and looked up at the twinkling stars in the sky. I'll go there someday, he thought.
Incorrect: Kris sighed, and looked up at the twinkling stars in the sky. I'll go there, someday, he thought.
I couldn't think of any other examples I had seen in the past, so this is the best I could do, but I hope it makes sense.
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