POV
A Fan Fiction Writer's GuideDon't change POV in the middle of the chapter just because you want to show one character's thoughts. One, it's better to leave your readers in suspense even if it's cliche and has a predictable plot. Two, it looks unprofessional. If you are going to change POV's during the story, label the title with whose POV it is like Rick Riordan does in the Kane Chronincles.
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