Logic
A Fan Fiction Writer's GuideOk, so I had this thread earlier today:
Anon: Luhan asked for Sehun's number, took him to party and asked him to dance , took him to NY, and Sehun be like: 'He wants to be my, FRIEND!?' (God sehun it couldnt be more obvious.. -.- )
Me: Hey, I said it was cliche, didn't I?
Anon: It could be cliche yes, but take the logics seriously in your ff. Just saying boo.
Me: If I were a guy and gay and became really good friends with the guy I liked who is supposed to be straight, I would be skeptical too. Plus, friends take friends to special places. My friend and I have gone to New York multiple times together.
My friends would force me to a party. And Sehun was invited by Luhan. Friends invite friends to parties.
Just saying, boo.
Me: Friends ask for friends' numbers, don't they? My friends ask for mine. I ask for my friends'. It's a normal occurance.
Ok, I left the person as Anon just so I wouldn't be rude and, I don't know, the ones that know me well and subscribed to this may go to that person's acc and be rude too. Anyway, this isn't really a tip for writing better, but I just felt that this needed to be addressed. One, for the love of all things holy, never call me "boo."
Also, I know you'll say: god, butthurt much? Hypocrite.
However, this person disregarded actual logic (and spelling and grammar... and proper comma usage and punctuation, but hey, that's not my problem). In the story I wrote, Sehun is gay and it's also from Sehun's point of view. So of course he sees Luhan as straight. As a straight guy, it's normal for Luhan to invite Sehun to parties, take him to New York, and friends ask for friends numbers. IT'S A NORMAL OCCURANCE. I do take logic a lot more seriously than a lot of people.
So, to finish my angry, anonymous responding, I just want to say: please don't be that person who disregards actual logic and not just fan fiction logic.
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