Avoid writing a "how to..."
A Fan Fiction Writer's GuideTry to avoid being too descriptive about someone's morning routine or how they take a shower. I'm pretty sure every one knows how to wash themselves.
Example:
Baekhyun trudged into the bathroom and stripped before turning on the shower head to find the right tempurature. Once it was perfect, he hopped in an let the water cascade down his back. Then, he picked up his-
Just no.
Please. I know how to shampoo my hair.
I understand you're trying to be descriptive and fancy-like. I did that in the past too, but it's unnecessary.
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