Ce~lebrate good times, c'mon!
A Fan Fiction Writer's Guide50th chapter guys.
Wow.
It shouldn't be that big of a deal because the chapters are super short.
I'm 50 away from 100.
So instead of putting just ONE no no, I'm going to just put a lot.
And....
START!
-In most stories, the parents hate their gay kid and kick them out of the house despite not being religious in the slightest which is usually the reason why a parent would hate their child.
-Everyone is a Mary Sue. Yay for bad character creation!
-Apparently dialogue is all one big paragraph.
Observe:
"Wow, you look amazing," Carter gawked as Benedict walked down the stairs in skinny jeans and a Superman t-shirt. "Really?" Benedict smiled and linked his hand with Carter's. "Yeah, you do." Carter kissed Benedict's head softly and they walked towards the door. Suddenly, there was a voice from Benedict's mother's room. "Benedict, sweetie?" "Yes mom?" "Is that Carter?" Benedict's face paled. "N-no! It's just a friend. We're going to the movies." "Ok! I hope you're not with that filthy animal." "Of course not, mom!" "Ok! Have fun, sweetie." Benedict sighed and led Carter out the door and they quickly hopped into Carter's car and drove away.
Two errors: One, no new paragraph, and Benedict's mom would be able to see out her window. Hey! Two no no's in one!
-Always with the skinny jeans and baggy outfits. I mean, I love to wear baggy things with skinny jeans, but not every day. Apparently the characters don't have a lot of choices when it comes to clothes. Usually a baggy sweatshirt, skinny jeans, and converse; baggy sweater, skinny jeans, and converse; or their boyfriend's huge t-shirt, skinny jeans, and converse. Guys, people wear other things, you know.
-The characters always go to a cafe or a scary movie on the first date. If some guy took me to a scary movie on the first date, he can just take me right back home. Anyway, enough cafes.
-Character's family is basically all dead. Even their aunts, uncles, grandmas, and cousins. Welp, better live with some guy from school who I think has a crush on me and is overly attractive. Yup... Because that happens.
So yeah. I hope you enjoyed these few "don'ts" of writing. Comment if you would like to add your idea, or comment because you're so kind. If this helped you a little, please give it a thumbs up because you are just a kind, kind person.
Merci beaucoup!
Comments