Thirty-Three

Heart Beats

Pairing: BomSoo
Word Count: 347


Be A Man


Wry, pallid hands mercilessly scraped and scrubbed the tears raw from her pink, swollen cheeks, the aching flesh hardly fazing or distinct in her moment of personal despair. She quickly admonished her poor judge of character and naive streak of love, her fingers clawing and tangling in her matted hair, "I never seem to learn, do I?" Nasal from the stream of tears and mucus, she readily choked, "Where did I go wrong, Soo?"

Fraught with an absurd amount of needless concerns, she glanced towards his silent, somber figure, desolation etched in the depths of her murky irises. Determined to wallow in anguish, she confronted him with her pitiful woes, her bitter tongue in brusque demand of clarity. "Where did I go wrong?"

Hopelessly taciturn, he silently motioned for her to come closer, his arms inviting and warm - her strength, her support. His steady embrace contained her shuddering sobs, the broiling pain left to soak in the resplendent folds of his coat. 

Dry, sheepish tones whimpered, "I loved him."

"I know." His whisper found itself lodged in the auburn curls tightly wound along her forehead. 

"I did good."

"I know."

"So, why didn't it work this time? What am I doing wrong, Soo?"

Inscrutable from her lower angle, her nose pressed in the crook of his neck, he murmured sparingly, "You can't force love, Bom - it wouldn't be love if it were that easy." Tuning into the fragile heaves and soft sniffles, he gently patted the top of her tottering head and assured her she possessed a pure, desirable heart. "He wasn't the one; he would have stayed and fought for you. Only a fool would let you go so easily."

Astonished by the virtuous assertion, she gasped, the sharp inhale of oxygen soon cries of startled, but pleasant joy. "You're so good to me, Soo. Why are you so good to me?"

Twirling the strands of her hair betwixt his fingers, he mumbled in honeyed hues, "I know."

Perhaps, he would eventually be good enough to voice the confessions caged in his own heart. 

"I know."


A/N: i don't even know. bommie's heart broken and soo's her bff that will always be there for her, but he foolishly loves her too. somehow, he stays despite his own heart-ache. /curls up and weeps/

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vip21_exotic #1
Chapter 17: I've read this collection of oneshots many, many times and especially this chapter but it still is as heartbreaking as the first time. Great writing style and story
chaekris #2
Chapter 42: omg chapter forty is the best chaekris fanfic! chaekris babies ... that babies are gonna be so so so perfect >_< i want chaekris as my parents!!!!! XD my daddy is ex exo ,my mommy is ex 2ne1... how perfect =))

btw!! keep writing. i love your story<3
springjichu
#3
Chapter 42: thank you so much for writing this. one of the best writings ive ever read. and for fulfilling our desperate 2nexo feels....just....thank you very much
littletea
#4
Chapter 40: oh dear all these chaekris family series ♥♥♥ definitely what i need to quench my chaekris thirst haha ♥ very adorable family.. ahh i hope it'll come true somehow not sure how.. lol~
meekosan #5
Chapter 41: Chapter 9 (BomSoo). I'm curious about that party hahah, plus the pairings can be involved as well. So I think it would be a very fun story. Also someone else has mentioned already, chapter 17 (BomSoo).
vip21_exotic #6
Chapter 41: Chapter 13 (BomSoo pairing) and chapter 32 (ChaeKris). I'm more of a ChaeKris shipper, but the one with Kyungsoo running from fans and hiding under Bom's table needs to be extended imo. I think you could develop their characters (and personalities) amazingly, and maybe give fans a different view of am iol :)
Zelda96 #7
Chapter 41: Chapter 40 :) I think it would be interesting to write and read more about the family that Chaerin and Kris have. And also chapter 35; i think it would be great to learn more about what exactly happened and the aftermath of everything; whether Minzy's and Kai's marriage can slowly but surely patch up or it fails just like that.
pradha
#8
Chapter 41: Chapter 34 or 35 unnie.. lil bit of angst..but i hope it will happy ending..