Eighteen

Heart Beats

Pairing: ChanDara
Word Count: 204


Beautiful You


While his lungs may have been healthy, robust, and perfectly capabling of intaking oxygen, they couldn't exactly function in this moment. Creased cuff-links nipped the tip of his nose and he struggled to breathe, because she was standing right in front of him, her small head tilted curiously towards his impish looks. 

And she was just absolutely lovely, her nose crinkled as she tried to place a name to his features.  

Rueful of misplacing the label to his unqiuely crafted facial structure, she grumbled her inability to recall the line of characters that defined him, her sweet palm gently placed in his coarse grasp, her head bent in greeting. 

Sensing him gradually relinquish his grip on her, a perplexed Sandara witnessed the giant before her choke and cradle his face stained of tears. 

Awkwardly gesticulating to solve the mystery of his silent cries, she was still tuned from his thoughts in his attempts to portray a dignified image - not that it mattered much anymore. 

Shuddering, he wondered how he could possibly convey to her that he had been waiting for the one day she would finally acknowledge his presence and direct her attention to solely him. 

How could he tell her such things?


A/N: i swear i'll give chanyeol a happy endin'. one day. one dayyyy.
@yllomobkrap: i know right!? he's always given off that vibe to me /sobs/ baby soo needs lovin' and carin'

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vip21_exotic #1
Chapter 17: I've read this collection of oneshots many, many times and especially this chapter but it still is as heartbreaking as the first time. Great writing style and story
chaekris #2
Chapter 42: omg chapter forty is the best chaekris fanfic! chaekris babies ... that babies are gonna be so so so perfect >_< i want chaekris as my parents!!!!! XD my daddy is ex exo ,my mommy is ex 2ne1... how perfect =))

btw!! keep writing. i love your story<3
springjichu
#3
Chapter 42: thank you so much for writing this. one of the best writings ive ever read. and for fulfilling our desperate 2nexo feels....just....thank you very much
littletea
#4
Chapter 40: oh dear all these chaekris family series ♥♥♥ definitely what i need to quench my chaekris thirst haha ♥ very adorable family.. ahh i hope it'll come true somehow not sure how.. lol~
meekosan #5
Chapter 41: Chapter 9 (BomSoo). I'm curious about that party hahah, plus the pairings can be involved as well. So I think it would be a very fun story. Also someone else has mentioned already, chapter 17 (BomSoo).
vip21_exotic #6
Chapter 41: Chapter 13 (BomSoo pairing) and chapter 32 (ChaeKris). I'm more of a ChaeKris shipper, but the one with Kyungsoo running from fans and hiding under Bom's table needs to be extended imo. I think you could develop their characters (and personalities) amazingly, and maybe give fans a different view of am iol :)
Zelda96 #7
Chapter 41: Chapter 40 :) I think it would be interesting to write and read more about the family that Chaerin and Kris have. And also chapter 35; i think it would be great to learn more about what exactly happened and the aftermath of everything; whether Minzy's and Kai's marriage can slowly but surely patch up or it fails just like that.
pradha
#8
Chapter 41: Chapter 34 or 35 unnie.. lil bit of angst..but i hope it will happy ending..