Ⓢ My mute mistress

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My mute mistress
by IsabelleT

He ran because now his life depended on it.

Rain pelted down in sheets and onto his face.

Who knew one wrong turn would bring him to where he is right now.

She breathed in deeply as she notice her father's half hearted signature.

Once again, he failed to see the As she got for languages and humanities.

And of course, an A star for Art.


 

Plot sypnosis:
The story revolves around our four characters. The main guy is a dropout from school due to his inability to pay his school fees after his parents' deaths. He went the wrong way and ended up with a big debt from the loan sharks. The main girl is a quiet girl with the inability to speak. She always had a silver spoon in but never felt happy. Her parents especially her father always focused on her bad grades on Maths but never saw her talent in art.
Her sister is what guys would call a dream girl. She is witty and a caring person. Though she can't help it when her parents show favouritism towards her, she feels a little proud at times. And their neighbor is the main girl's tutor. He is one of those rare gentlemen and is often found smiling. He doesn't mind helping girls just that... he cannot stand taking the girls to shopping trips.

A turn of events cause their lives to be interwined. The main guy found a new chance in life, maybe that mafia boss wasn't that cruel after all...but instead of being a runner of some sort, he has to be a servant for a rich family? Is this some sort of joke? What happens when he falls for the older sister of the home, when the one right for him is the young mute mistress.

Genre: Romance, Comedy

Characters: The gambler, The mute mistress, the witty older sister, the gentleman.

Inspiration: This was so long ago. June 2009, wow, can't believe 4 years have passed. Anyways, I don't know if it'll be rude to use the word "mute" maybe it's just me but yup. Wrote this till chapter 5 and wonder why I didn't continue.Haha. It seems like the main guy's debtor has a lot of humour to send him to be a servant, haha.

Suggestions: My idea was to make the two girls' father the brother of the main guy's debtor. (Whaaat?) I hope you understand whatever I just typed haha. This story is special that you can make it funny or melodramatic, up to you. For me, I prefer it to be more slow paced with a tinge of humour. I don't know what I just said, must be the coffee I just drank. That's all :) Oh, if you need sample of what the first chapter roughly looks like, you can PM me. (If you chose this idea)

Status: Available

PS: Min, that is one cool looking gif :DDD

 

 

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Pen3Paper
#1
Chapter 17: I love this idea! Is it still up for adoption?
Btw, can you tel me where the if is from? It looks so familiar but I can't put my finger on it, and it's bugging me >.<
shipeo
#2
Chapter 18: i'm not sure if this place is still alive, but can i just say i absolutely adore your ideas and if the admins of this place are still here, i'd like to adopt this story please!
quimsang #3
Chapter 2: i want to adopt this story!
the storyline gave me inspiration.
although i may tweak the storyline to fit,
if ever i get this idea, of course.
belfioure
#5
Chapter 27: Can I adopt Her Personal Apprentice ? Oh wow. Your ideas are brilliant *-*
nihil_
#6
Chapter 42: ahh why do i always end up giggling over your ideas
seriously this is so nice,,
id read the heck outta dis ; u ; <3
also 502 bad getaway could also be a cool story title imo
Arianwen
#7
Chapter 17: may I adopt The Violets? *^*
hurricxne
#8
Chapter 32: i'm plannin to adopt this story idea called, 'I Like You'
but i'm not sure yet.
i'm thinking about it though.
just not sure if i'll be able to have enough inspiration and ideas to build up the base of the story.
if ya know what i mean.
i do actually already have like one or two plans for the story. teehee
just letin my imagination build more ideas up and evolving them until there are enough for me to confirm that i can write this with not much writer's block in the way.
i don't even know if i'm making any sense.


by the way , you have a real good imagination there. ;7;
nihil_
#9
Chapter 41: omg this sounds so cute i hope someone adopts this <3