Title: Do you Remember?

Author: BAPisPerfect

Reviewer: PandaChels

Title:  (3/5) The title fits the story perfectly. However, there are so many fanfics with that title and it could easily be overlooked. I would maybe suggest focusing on a different aspect of the story, or thinking of a more unique title about remembering.

Foreword & Description: (8/10) Interesting, yet there were a few grammatical mistakes in the forward. The ending of the excerpt was slightly confusing though. I think that she should have said the question first, and then you could have talked about how Daehyun’s world shattered as each word left her lips.

Grammar, Spelling, etc.: (14/15) There were a few errors, but close to none. Although you did mess up on the correct form of ‘your’ towards the end, nevertheless there were very few errors for such a long story. It was very close to perfect!

Plot Line: (19/20). Honestly, when I saw that chapter and how much you had written, I thought that it was just going to drag on, but it didn’t. Whether it was the marriage, honeymoon, birth, visiting the parents, or dealing with Mee, your story was constantly interesting!

Flow: (9.5/10) The only part that I will take off is that in some places you messed up the names. One incident that I remember is when Mee confronts Jae in the diner, and Daehyun comes in. You wrote down the name ‘min’ instead of ‘mi’ and it caused me to become momentarily confused, but I understood.

Also, a lot of your pronouns were confusing. You would sometimes put a ‘her’ where ‘his’ should be and I would have to reread with what I assumed you meant.

Originality: (7/10) It wasn’t that original. She lost her memory and then stayed with the guy she loved, but I still liked it. I loved how Mee was kind of like a saesang fan.

(R/N: Towards the end, I was like: Wouldn’t it be weird if Daehyun wasn’t the guy that she fell for? But that isn’t all too original is it…I don’t know…maybe. Lol)

Characters: (10/10) You seriously had these guys down to a perfect ‘T’. I was especially surprised with how you were with Mee. She was the perfect psycho/desperate/fanatic/jealous girl!

Personally, my favorite was Jongup. You made him seem so adorable and childish and once you said he was your dancing bias I understood! XD

Overall Enjoyment:  (10/10) I loved it! Towards the end, when Jae went through the same feelings of watching Daehyun…it was amazing! I was like…wow…this was well though through.

Bonuses: (10/10) Mee was a psycho and made the story so interesting. I love characters like this, even though while I’m reading the story I hate it.

On a similar note have you read/seen ‘Goong’/’Princess Hours’. The antagonist, Yul, is my favorite character in the whole story and he actually reminded me of Mee to a certain extent.

This was your first story?! Wow, so much better than my own. It was honestly A-MA-ZING! I can’t believe you wrote that as your first story!

(90.5/100)

Reviewer's Note: Normally, I don't try to make my reviews so short, but I honestly didn't see much wrong with this story! Again, I loved this story! So much fluff and so adorable! Sorry it took some time to review! I was busy with Summer Reading! >_>

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