Title: Meant to Be

Author: Katakatica

Reviewer: Leisty

Title:  (3/5) The title isn’t that quite catchy, though it has a connection to the plot, the title just doesn’t really stand out that much.

Foreword & Description: (9/10) I actually like your foreword and description. You even put a part of your first chapter to it. But that would make the readers’ skip that part because they already read it.

Grammar, Spelling, etc.: (13/15) Just one few typo, you put sad instead of said. And your punctuations are fine except that you can use the semicolon instead of the comma.

Plot Line: (18/20) The plot is very intriguing. I only deducted some point since I don’t really have anything to say about it since it only has one chapter to it.

Flow: (8/10) The flow, same reason, it only has one chapter to it but even with only one chapter, you manage to make it eye catching.

Originality: (9/10) Again, arranged marriages are pretty common. But the part with asking a fairy for help is something unique. Most arrange marriages get boring because the plot they use is pretty cliché, but yours isn’t. You don’t use a grandma or someone older to make the characters marry each other out of their own will.

Characters: (10/10) Maya seems to be pretty real for an OC. To be honest, I stopped reading OC/You fics because they tend to make the OC to be Mary Sue. But you managed to make her real, the way how you describe how she was feeling, how self conscious she was. I just hope you don’t end up transforming Maya to Mary Sue.

Overall Enjoyment:  (10/10) I really enjoyed reading this; you’re giving me hope to read an OC fic again. I’m even tempted to subscribe, I’m actually debating if whether or not I should subscribe. This could even be a one shot and it will still be awesome.

Bonuses: (10/10) For the poster and background also for not using every color available on the planet.

(90/100)

Note: For the note that you posted on your comment, yes you are heading into the right direction with the plot and the OC and it doesn’t seem cliché for an arranged marriage type of story.

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