Otteoke?! Stuck Between Kris and Sehun by twosuns
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You're probably thinking how I got to read your story this fast? Well, I was one of your subscriber but I stopped reading your story after the 70th chapter. Why? You will know it when you read the plot part..
►Reviewed by Emy
Story Title → 2 of 5
Your title is gripping and unique but in my opinoin it doesn't match the story. I think 'My violent life with the annoying brat!' matches the story better xD
Main Image → 5 of 5
It's good!
Foreword & Description → 0 of 10
There is no foreword or discription, expect of some sentence about how much you love EXO and SuJu.
Characters → 17 of 20
Lee Bin Yoon is quiet too arrogant and violent but I like it how she treats little kids :D
Suho is alos funny and sometimes careless, I would love to have a brother like him.
Kris is... what should I say? He's okay...
Sehun, Yoona and Jessica have a typical character to be honest quiet too typical.
Apperance → 9 of 10
Not bad but could have been better.
Originality → 20 of 20
Besides the typical characters is everything good. I've never read a similar story! Also the way you write it is another asset.
Plot→ 11 of 20
Let's get to the part why I stopped reading your story. Your story has barely something to do with Sehun or Kris. Yes, I know there are some Sehun or Kris times but in my eyes are Chanyeol and Baekhuyn more in the foreground as the main characters. It's more a story based on a girls crazy school life than a romance. The half of your chapters are useless. I don't say they are bad, no in fact, they are funny and enjoyable but have nothing to do with the story. And I didn't read your story till the end... since this was too much for me.
Reviewer Bonus → 5 of 10
I love your crazy ideas >u< and how Baekhyun calls her 'boss'.
Total: 69 out of 100
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