Simple, and makes the reader wonder what the odd feeling is. Nice.

It’s on point, I can’t find anything wrong with it. It’s the first time I’ve given a review a 10/10 on the forward so feel special!

Nothing wrong.

Love triangle fics are way too common here on AFF, and yours isn’t any different. But despite the fact that your fic is common, your plot was solid, and you executed the twist ending well. I like how you kept the fic rather ambiguous and mislead me into thinking Minji was Kyuhyun’s love interest.

I would’ve given you a 19/20 , but I am assuming this was based off of K.Will’s ‘Please Don’t’, and thus this plot is not originally yours. If you did base this off of K.Will’s ‘Please Don’t’ you must credit that in your forward.

I see no errors whatsoever.

I felt that the characters were not evolved well enough, but seeing that this is a one shot, I understand you can’t fully develop the characters. 

I enjoyed reading your writing, it flows quite nicely.