Shark & Elephant Review Shop [HIATUS]

Description

 

 
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(shark &elephant)

greetings, humans! this is shark and elephant welcoming you to our fantabulous review shop! 
if you are wondering, yes, that is, in fact, our faces up there on the poster when we were in our
baby shark and elephant days. aren't we just painfully adorable?
 
here at shark & elephant reviews, think of us as your guardian writing angels except
we're nowhere near holy and we're kind of, well, harsh sometimes(a lot). but it's all for the better!
our goal is to give you our honest opinion and thoughts about your story as we believe this is a
good way to improve not only your writing, but ours as well. we will not sugar-coat things
and will state what we found wrong or right about you story. we may be strict, but we will also
give you the right amount of praise if you truly deserve it. if you want constructive
criticism, please do request from us as we are here to help!
 
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poster by eu-phoric

 

Foreword

 
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(the rules)

( 01 ) please subscribe first before requesting, but you can unsuscribe
once you receive your review.
( 02 ) credit us on your description/foreword and link back to this shop.
( 03 ) it would be nice if you comment below once you've requested and
once you've picked up your review. not mandatory, though.
( 04 ) you can't choose who you want as a reviewer.
( 05 ) we do not accept .
( 06 ) absolutely no bashing the reviewers!
( 07 ) if you think a review was unfair, state your reason and
        we'll look into it.
( 08 ) we don't have a blacklist, but if you provoke us, your is pretty
        much banned from here.
( 09 ) please be patient when waiting for your review. we have lives,
        believe it or not.
( 10 ) if you're satisfied with your review, we would appreciate it if
        you upvote this shop!
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(rubric)

                Title: --/5
(did the title fit your story? if i were looking for a good fanfic to read,
will it catch my eye? does it stand out from the sea of fanfics in this
website?)
       Foreword/description: --/10
(one of the most important elements of a story. did it catch our attention?
is it enough for readers to move on to the first chapter?)
             Appearance: --/5
(is your story neat and organized? does the poster look decent, and did
you use the right font and colors?)
     PLot: --/20
(is it unique and original or just plain boring? will we be engrossed into 
the plot or will it makes us want to quit reading right away?) 
           mechanics: --/20
(here we evaluate your grammar, punctuation usage, spelling, etc.
all that good stuff.) 
        characterization: --/ 20
(are they realistic, relatable, and interesting? or are they empty characters
with no depth in their personalities whatsoever?)
           flow/style: --/15
(is your flow smooth? is it too slow or too fast? as for the latter, we will
talk about your writing style and hooking techniques.)
        Overall enjoyment: --/5
(did we enjoy it? was it worth-while reading your story?)
 
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(request form)

username:

story name:

story link:

story genre/s:

story type/status: (Is it completed or not? chaptered or a one-shot?)

other: (do you have a specific area/rubric you want us to help you with more?)

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BelleandFran
[shark&elephant;] new batch is open guys!

Comments

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onew-sangtae
#1
username: onew-sangtae

story name: Getcha Head in the Game!

story name: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/510729/getcha-head-in-the-game-exo-crack-ot12-highschoolmusical

story genre/s: crack/comedy, i guess (and a lot of references)

story type/status: uncompleted; chaptered

other: is it too repetitive or...?????? i , i just need like a punch in the face and i guess this is a place to get punched in the face?
writerinprogress94
#2
username: writerinprogress94

story name: ABA: Accidental Baggage Assumption

story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/655736/aba-accidental-baggage-assumption-oneshot-romance-sungmin-superjunior-you-airport

story genre/s: I have it tagged as romance, but... I'm really not sure XD

story type/status: Completed/one-shot (possibility of being turned into a short story later)

other: Does putting it in 2nd POV make it seem too awkward? And what genre WOULD it be under? Please and thank you!
sweetcide-r
#3
username: sweetcide-r

story name: Painful Regret

story link:https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/464569/painful-regret-infinite-myungsoo-oneshot-romance-suzy-myungzy

story genre/s: angst

story type/status: completed-one shot

other: more suitable title maybe? hihihi thank you :>>
myungxsm
#4
username: TaeMiMi

story name: Isolated Destiny

story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/634236/isolated-destiny-angst-infinite-romance-woohyun

story genre/s: Angst;romance

story type/status: (is it completed or not? chaptered or a one-shot?) chaptered;not completed

other: (do you have a specific area/rubric you want us to help you with more?)maybe the plot part? :/ thanks in advance!
momodays09
#5
momodays09
#6
username: momodays09

story name: Last Breath

story link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/597465

story genre/s: angst, sad

story type/status: (is it completed or not? chaptered or a one-shot?): Short chapter, completed

other: (do you have a specific area/rubric you want us to help you with more?): Could you look more into the characterization and flow? And also the mechanics please? x.x
lissamary
#8
username: lissamary

story name: The Last Petal

story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/607250/the-last-petal-angst-oneshot-romance-yixing-exolay

story genre/s: Romance, angst

story type/status: complete

other: -

Take your time :)
World-Class #9