[REVIEW] Calling Ajitofu

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Calling Ajitofu

Reviewed by Chibi_me


Title (4/5): Your title was very interesting and it made me want to click on your story.

Foreword & Description (---/10):

Characterization (10/10): While reading your story, you've described your characters really well, therefore, I will give you full marks for your good description of your characters!

Originality (14/15): Usually, I wouldn't really read any Taeyeon and Tiffany fanfics, but yours made me want to continue reading. However, I have to admit that I remembered reading something very similar to this.

Plot (14/15): I really enjoyed your story's plot!! 

Spelling/Grammar (25/25): I'm usually very strict when it comes to this, but full marks for you! Currently, I didn't see any mistakes on spelling or grammar.

Flow (9/10): Your story was understandable, it wasn't too fast on anything (if you know what I mean)

Enjoyment (10/10): I enjoyed your story very much! You're story is very unique.


     

                     TOTAL: 86/100

                         (not including Forewrord & Description)

 

 

*Reviwers Note :  I'm sorry if I said anything bad... I really like your story! :)

 

 

Owner's Note : Sorry for the long wait ! and for the change of reviewer !

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TaquitosNOMNOM #1
Are you going to open again?
BTS_Mochi
#2
Requested!!! ^^
kpopcllo
#3
Sorry, I'd like to cancel my request.
xiu_pao #4
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neomanuisarang
#5
I figured I should tell you this out of respect. I'm completely revising my story, 'The One They've Never Heard Of', and I might change the title. Would you mind if I did that? I'd like to request here again though, when I've thought up of a good title to suit the "new" story. Thank you.
tnslzb
#6
Chapter 29: thanks! picked up!
mistressdean
#7
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