CALLING BYUNTAEPOTATO

Story Title: The ual Experiment

Starring: EXO

Reviewed by: pikachzu

Title: 5/5

- The title was really eye-catching! It really REALLY made me want to read it. :3

Foreword & Description: 10/10

- The foreword and description had me clicking the next button. //

Characterization: 8/10

- The characterization was quite confusing for me even if there were bolded words saying who's POV is this. I got confused in some parts where you put "He" or "She" in that certain POV, and in that certain POV, the he/she if referring to himself/herself. Like, for example:

// Kris' POV

I heard her laughter behind the peach-colored door. He reached out and turned the door knob. // 

Know what'm sayin? xD

- But, overall, I liked how the member's thoughts are well laid out. :D 

Originality: 13/15

- This should be fifteen over fifteen, but then I remembered some story that has a tinsy bit similarity to this story. But I'm still glad of myself giving you a high score though, and I think this is the first story that has this plot? Correct me if I'm wrong. :D

Plot: 15/15

- I REALLY loved the plot! It's just- it's just pure genius! I mean IMAGINE the story in your head: EXO in a closed dorm. They can't go out to fulfill their pleasures with women. They only have each other to rely on. EHE. /wiggles eyebrows/ ;DDD *ehembyuntaeehem* >_>

Spelling/Grammar: 23/25

- I haven't really read the whole story yet, but I have a feeling you don't have wrong spellings or grammars. You're fluent in English, aren't cha? :D Still twenty-three over twenty-five because of what I stated above in characterization.

Flow: 10/10

- I liked the flow of the story; not too slow, not too fast. :D

Enjoyment: 10/10

- I SUPAH ENJOYED IT. OHO MY FEELS.

TOTAL: 94/100

Note to ByuntaePotato:

Hello! :D I enjoyed reading your story. Seriously. But then I forgot to put in my bio that I don't do rated reviews. xD This is the first and the last one. :|

Congrats on having a high score! :D You deserved it! :D

- pikachzu

Review date: 02.24.13' - 02.24.13'

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