Calling eagle_tamer

Reviewed by chasonwooyunkey

Title : The title was really interesting :)                                                                                                                           9/10

Foreword and Description : The foreword is great as well as the Description,BUT what i don't like is why put links ??  You can just put the picture right away.                                                                                                                    8/10

Characterization : I like how you introduce the character's but, you schould put their characteristics.         9/10

Originality : I like the story, everything except it's !                                                                                         15/15

Plot : Uhm, i really don't like story...                                                                                                             10/15

Spelling/Grammar : You need to be careful on you grammars and spelling.                                                           21/25

" Kwon Jiyong. Kill him head straight. Make sure no one sees you enter the house. It's full of CCTVs so make sure "

→ " Kwon Jiyong. Kill him head straight. Make sure no one sees you enter the house. It's full of CCTVs so be careful "

The phrase " make sure " was redundant in the sentence, and it really annoys me.

" It's midnight Yunho for God's sake people would naturally be asleep " annoyed Dara said

→  " It's midnight Yunho for God's sake people would naturally be asleep " Dara said annoyed

→ " It's midnight Yunho for God's sake people would naturally be asleep " The annoyed Dara said

- Your Grammar !

" How cleaver of you to let me get close enough so Daehyun can aim at me "

→ " How clever of you to let me get close enough so Daehyun can aim at me "

- Please check your spelling, before updating :)

" I don't expect Daehyun to side with me "

→ " I don't expect Daehyun to be in my side "

- Your GRAMMAR !!

" Junhong was amazed by how much fodd his hyung can cook within 4 hours "

→ " Junhong was amazed by how much food his hyung can cook within 4 hours "

- PLEASE YOUR SPELLING !

Flow :                                                                                                                                                                                   8/10

Chapter 1 : It was a good start :)

Chapter 2 : It was amazing, but things happened so fast. I got confused on how or why did he/she arrived at that place

Chapter 3 : Same as my comment on Chapter 2.

Chapter 4 : The events happened really FAST ! And you did not put GD&TOP convo, it would be more interesting.

Chapter 5 : I like the Chapter's flow :)

Chapter 6 : It's amazing i guess, for all the fans, but for me i don't like it.

Chapter 7 : This Chapter is my favorite one. A lot of ACTIONS !

Chapter 8 : This Chapter was so fluffy :)

Chapter 9 : HAHAHHAAH :D I was laughing hard, reading this chapter

Enjoyment : I'm Sorrt D: But i don't like the story :( I don't like - stories ..                                          5/10

TOTAL : 75/100

*Reviewer's Note :

I'm so sorry if i offend you :(

Thank you for requesting ^^