The Unexpected Rival

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I was sitting on a chair… I felt a rope tied up on my body… a cloth was gagged in my mouth… I gasped for air and whimpered a bit… then a voice suddenly came out of my mouth…

“Where am I?” I slowly glanced at the place… it was so dark… and I can barely see a shadow standing few miles in front of my place… then that shadow started to walk… walk towards me… I think that shadow’s holding something… something shiny I think?

Then suddenly…I recognized that… that shadow is a girl… she has a long hair with curls below… heels tip-toeing on the solid tiled floor. Then she stopped… stared at me for a while then I heard a laugh… so loud that echoed the empty room… its an evil laugh…

 “Yah! Who are you?!” my voice was trembling with fear… “HA.HA.HA.HA…. You don’t know who I am… hmmm… just guess…” she said

“I have no time for guessing!! Just let me out of here!!” I replied with a force on my voice… “I don’t think that threat will work with me!!” she said clenching the shiny thing in her hands. She walked towards me and pointed that shiny thing below my chin and bent it upwards… I think it’s a knife!

“Huh!… no one will save you here!! Like the thing you did to me! You didn’t think of my feelings...  I got embarrassed in the whole school because of what you did!! I will never forgive you! You !! And now that I had the chance to take revenge… you’ll pay from what you did!” she said yelling in front of me… I recognized the voice… its familiar!

“I don’t know who you are! I don’t know what you’re talking about?! Please just get me out of here!!” I said… begging.

“No! You’ll pay from what you did!! I remember… you were my best friend… I trusted you! But you broke that trust… and now you’ll pay for it!” then suddenly I remember… then I said…

“Song Nam Jin, is that you?” drop of tears fell from my eyes… and I sobbed. “You never treated me as a friend, do you? I suffered a lot… I became so depressed and decided to be a rebellious one…” she said pausing a moment. She walked away without noticing that I am gone in her sight then someone grabbed me and took me in a mere darker place….

I don’t know who that person was …

But I know that I am safe in his hands… 

Foreword

Hello readers! This is my first time writing a story and I'm just a beginner. I am inspired to write a story because of my friends who loves reading and writing fanfic stories! Thank you guys! There may be some grammatical errors that I may use. Well because I never wrote a story before but still I will try my best to fix it up. I hope that you will like this story!! Your comments and suggestions will always be accepted! I'm looking forward to it! :D

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Abakobako
#1
aaaa this fanfic is so great-please update soon chingu :D
and i love the characters too~ :)
xuxu_kut3_99 #2
Update soon
AngelGuo123 #3
update soon chingu
AngelGuo123 #4
this jiseung fanfic?
oleyvia #5
emm.. getting more n more interesting, what will happen to both of them.. kkya im excited kekeke, wait 4 ur update
oleyvia #6
really like.. please update soon :)
Freda123
#7
Okay....I love this fanfic so I'll wait for u to update....:)))
rascaltwilight019
#8
Freda123: Park Ji Yeon and Song Nam Jin were the same in the poster and story... hehehe.. Ji Yeon is Song Nan Jin that sticks around Seung Ho.. hehe. just keep on reading.. <br />
Uhmm... SECRET.. WAHAHA... just hang on .. I'll update the chapters if I have time.. :)) <3
Freda123
#9
One more question: Is jiyeon gonna stay like a bad girl!?