Investigators&Vampires; I

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Yang Seungho is a private investigator   eight months ago his partner Max Changmin took off to smooth over a deal  involving money a nine year old girl and a vampire lord, the following events happend during that time period leading up to Seungho's decision to go in hiding  ...

Foreword

Yang Seungho is a private investigator.. eight months ago his partner Max Changmin took off to smooth over a deal involving a large amount of money, a nine year old girl and a vampire lord,the following events happened during those eight months leading up to Seungho's decision to go into hiding ...

Special thanks to Soritsu for makig me my story photo <3

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Amalya #1
Chapter 15: This was quite an interesting read, if a bit short. A lot of things seemed to come from out of left field, such as some of the character deaths, but I really did enjoy the twist of the story itself being written 'in story' by two of the characters. That was actually quite a pleasant surprise.

Your ending pairing was unexpected as well, but not bad. I can see it work actually. Two people who suddenly lose the ones they love, holding to each other for comfort and maybe genuine affection at some point.

I'm not overly familiar with most of MBLAQ, except for Joon and I thoroughly enjoyed his antics. They were entirely amusing and I think his ostentatious behavior rather stole the show. haha I will have to check out the continuation to see what you followed up with. Good job. :)
drYang #2
Chapter 15: haha!what a twist! id dint expect joon and seungho to end up together :0 anyway, they're both BLAQies, so it doesnt matter :) nice one authornim :)
Sorotsu #3
Chapter 15: Kikwang is mean to me T^T
Sorotsu #4
Chapter 14: TOP!!!! T^T -SOBS- WAE!!!!
Sorotsu #5
Chapter 13: ALRUDFGLIAVUETRLDUHJMVXCZIUHAFD AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! I CRIED!!!! OH MY GOODNESS!!!
Sorotsu #6
Chapter 12: NOOOOOO!!!! NAE!!! WAE!!! OTL I DISAPPROVE!!!! -SOBS-
Sorotsu #7
Chapter 11: WHATT!!!! YOSEOB AND DONGHO!!! AHHHH!!!! WHAT!!! AEHFKOAWHEDOAHWRDOH!!!!!!

on a side note.... i want to see Joons magic tricks T^T (excluding the disappearing)
Sorotsu #8
Chapter 10: Joon should come "accidentally" spill water on himself at my house -w-
Sorotsu #9
Chapter 9: JOON <3 I WILL BE YOUR SLEEPING BUDDY!!!
drYang #10
Chapter 9: yey!chapter9! :) seungho.... ><
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