I&V Chapter 8- Discussion

Investigators&Vampires; I

" Oh come on I knew this was gonna happen!"

 

Yoseob tossed the papers he'd been reading in his hand on the desk infront of him. He rolled his eyes and raised and an eyebrow . Kikwang jumped up from the seat he'd been sitting in across the room, " What , what's wrong with it , I think it's a decent story."

" Of course everyone is going to expect Changmin to save Seungho, and the rest of the bad vampires  to get their due, and for Seungho to go into hiding because Changmin wants him to and there's going to be a big sappy goodbye scene blah blah , I've read this kind of stuff before ," Yoseob sighed.

Kikwang looked at him , " Are you seriously going to stop reading it ?

Yoseob looked at him, " Am I going to be in it ?"

Kikwang glared, " Is that the only reason you stopped reading ," he crossed his arms , ' Come on keep reading, the good parts are coming up."

Yoseob looked at him , "Am I going to be in it ?"

Kikwang sighed, " I'll write you a small part, keep on reading ."

Yoseob rolled his eyes, " Promise you'll give me a part in it , some thing y, I wanna be a hero somewhere in the next chapter and I'm like a real bad I kick some vampire and I---" he stopped as he noticed Kikwang giving him a look as if to say , " I could care less if you were the garbage man with only two lines."

Yoseob threw a pencil at him , " Are you listening properly?"

Kikwang laughed and tossed the pen from behind his ear at Yoseob, " Fine I'll give you a few moments in the story."
 

Yoseob smiled, " Really ?!! Awesome ?!!"

Kikwang rolled his eyes , ' Now shut up and read."

Yoseob  raised and eyebrow, " I'm only going to continue if you promise to make me bad in your story."

Kikwang glared, " Shut up and read before I make you the eighty year old man who has a bad back ."

Yoseob stuck his tongue out , " That's so not bad ," he frowned.

Kikwang sighed , " I promise to make you a bad character, now for the bagilinonth time shut up and read."

Yoseob smiled picked up the papers and continued reading; Kikwang sat back in his chair and continued writing ..

 

 

I'm so curious to see what you all have to say about this chapter lol . muahahahaha >:D

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Amalya
#1
Chapter 15: This was quite an interesting read, if a bit short. A lot of things seemed to come from out of left field, such as some of the character deaths, but I really did enjoy the twist of the story itself being written 'in story' by two of the characters. That was actually quite a pleasant surprise.

Your ending pairing was unexpected as well, but not bad. I can see it work actually. Two people who suddenly lose the ones they love, holding to each other for comfort and maybe genuine affection at some point.

I'm not overly familiar with most of MBLAQ, except for Joon and I thoroughly enjoyed his antics. They were entirely amusing and I think his ostentatious behavior rather stole the show. haha I will have to check out the continuation to see what you followed up with. Good job. :)
drYang
#2
Chapter 15: haha!what a twist! id dint expect joon and seungho to end up together :0 anyway, they're both BLAQies, so it doesnt matter :) nice one authornim :)
Sorotsu
#3
Chapter 15: Kikwang is mean to me T^T
Sorotsu
#4
Chapter 14: TOP!!!! T^T -SOBS- WAE!!!!
Sorotsu
#5
Chapter 13: ALRUDFGLIAVUETRLDUHJMVXCZIUHAFD AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! I CRIED!!!! OH MY GOODNESS!!!
Sorotsu
#6
Chapter 12: NOOOOOO!!!! NAE!!! WAE!!! OTL I DISAPPROVE!!!! -SOBS-
Sorotsu
#7
Chapter 11: WHATT!!!! YOSEOB AND DONGHO!!! AHHHH!!!! WHAT!!! AEHFKOAWHEDOAHWRDOH!!!!!!

on a side note.... i want to see Joons magic tricks T^T (excluding the disappearing)
Sorotsu
#8
Chapter 10: Joon should come "accidentally" spill water on himself at my house -w-
Sorotsu
#9
Chapter 9: JOON <3 I WILL BE YOUR SLEEPING BUDDY!!!
drYang
#10
Chapter 9: yey!chapter9! :) seungho.... ><