I&V- Chapter 1- The Trouble Begins

Investigators&Vampires; I

 

This is a small introduction to the story......
 
 
You have one new message- Seungho stay hidden I will find you, I'm being watched. 
 
Seungho looked out over the ocean as he stood on the beach,trying to understand what had happened in the past year it had seemed like only a few days ago, he
 
had been working side by side the one he loved and now he was in hiding. This final case had taken his family and friends, he was left with nothing. 
 
8 months ago-
 
Changmin rushed up to the dark wooden office door and knocked, "Enter," a voice called from behind it, and he entered.
 
Seungho turned from his standing position at the window of his private investigator office, that over looked a busy street. Changmin walked up to him, " We tried
 
everything but his lawyers won't let us speak to him."
 
Seungho sighed, " Can we arrange a secret meeting, we need to get him to tell us the code to the briefcase,those thugs aren't going wait forever for him give them
 
access to all that money."
 
" He says he's not giving them a damn thing," Changmin frowned, ' he denies her being his daughter, she's only nine years old," tears appeared in his eyes, as he
 
thought of the length he'd go to save his sister.
 
He turned away for a few moments then turned back, " Let me talk to the thugs, make some sort of deal."
 
Seungho glared, " Don't even think about it, you know what happened to Key, he never came back to this building ; he went straight into the ground-literally, and
 
don't try to take off without me knowing either." Seungho hoped that he could could understand that he said all of it for his own good. Changmin left the building
 
remarking about getting a coffee, five minutes later Seungho recieved a text.
 
"Going to make a deal."
 
Seungho growled, " Damn," grabbed his jacket and ran out of the room....
 
 
 
 
What's going to happen to Changmin? Will Seungho be able to stop him before it's too late, or will they both face the thugs together..... Stay tuned next week for more :)
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Amalya
#1
Chapter 15: This was quite an interesting read, if a bit short. A lot of things seemed to come from out of left field, such as some of the character deaths, but I really did enjoy the twist of the story itself being written 'in story' by two of the characters. That was actually quite a pleasant surprise.

Your ending pairing was unexpected as well, but not bad. I can see it work actually. Two people who suddenly lose the ones they love, holding to each other for comfort and maybe genuine affection at some point.

I'm not overly familiar with most of MBLAQ, except for Joon and I thoroughly enjoyed his antics. They were entirely amusing and I think his ostentatious behavior rather stole the show. haha I will have to check out the continuation to see what you followed up with. Good job. :)
drYang
#2
Chapter 15: haha!what a twist! id dint expect joon and seungho to end up together :0 anyway, they're both BLAQies, so it doesnt matter :) nice one authornim :)
Sorotsu
#3
Chapter 15: Kikwang is mean to me T^T
Sorotsu
#4
Chapter 14: TOP!!!! T^T -SOBS- WAE!!!!
Sorotsu
#5
Chapter 13: ALRUDFGLIAVUETRLDUHJMVXCZIUHAFD AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! I CRIED!!!! OH MY GOODNESS!!!
Sorotsu
#6
Chapter 12: NOOOOOO!!!! NAE!!! WAE!!! OTL I DISAPPROVE!!!! -SOBS-
Sorotsu
#7
Chapter 11: WHATT!!!! YOSEOB AND DONGHO!!! AHHHH!!!! WHAT!!! AEHFKOAWHEDOAHWRDOH!!!!!!

on a side note.... i want to see Joons magic tricks T^T (excluding the disappearing)
Sorotsu
#8
Chapter 10: Joon should come "accidentally" spill water on himself at my house -w-
Sorotsu
#9
Chapter 9: JOON <3 I WILL BE YOUR SLEEPING BUDDY!!!
drYang
#10
Chapter 9: yey!chapter9! :) seungho.... ><