Battle.

I'm Not Her.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5x82867XkvI

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"Oppas..."

"_________?"

YoSeob looked at you.

"Is that really Lee _________?!"

DooJoon asked you, you nodded, waving.

"OKAY BATTLE START."

JunHyung began:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eRjLzu4OpB0

Okay grab on to that last feeling and move

Holding the mic instead of a baton check it up now

Come back to this place and make it hot with an undeniable power

Burning this place even hotter just leave it up to me

I'm the mastermind untouchable joker

GiKwang, YoSeob and HyunSeung began to sing and dance, DooJoon pushed the DJ aside, winked and spun out tunes.

B.A.P frowned a bit, never having lost before.

Zelo stepped out and rapped: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tk7ME2DwIEM

To you who are thirsty from the long fight

I throw a flying punch

Everyone's different

Everyone takes sides

And those words are just words of ignorant people

Since the words that echo in my heart are different from yours

JunHyung smirked and rapped as if to belittle the 16 year old.

Zelo frowned, not backing down:

Damn their attitudes aren't really that cool

Oh my hyungnims look at the state they're in

That's just really not it

Those bad guys

Isn't defeating them

What a real man does?

Rapping like this

Isn't that the good stuff?

JunHyung rolled his eyes boredly but turned to you instead:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P93loT1XJ1k

Left and then right

You shake me

Disco night

From top to bottom

From front to back

You flip my heart inside out

You are like cotton candy I never get sick of you

Before this night is all over, let's love all night

You blushed while everyone else twitched in irritation.

Especially DaeHyun, *Who the hell is he?*

B.A.P went to a dance break:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2hIForeK5RM

Fiercely smirking as they did the stomp dance, girls swooned.

Zelo and YongGuk both rapped,

Yo you want me to kick your ?

Let me work out

All you fakes 

Go away

We are worldwide

B2ST wagged their fingers and danced to 'Beautiful Night'.

*Wow...B2ST really improved.*

B.A.P turned to the crowd to decide who they liked better, DooJoon thoughtfully tapped his chin.

YoSeob and GiKwang glanced at each other.

HyunSeung and DongWoo whispered to each other before whispering in JunHyung's ear.

JunHyung nodded and turned to B.A.P, "Okay fine. You win."

"Yeah!"

B.A.P cheered and did handshakes.

"But~ We're kidnapping her BYE~"

YoSeob grabbed your hand, quickly pulling you out.

DaeHyun stood there, dumbfounded, *What? NO!*

He ran out only to see a trail of dust left behind by B2ST's car.

He grabbed his hair in frustration.

Meanwhile B.A.P was basking in another win as the club chanted, "B.A.P! B.A.P! B.A.P!"

Soon they got off the stage, HimChan winked at a few girls, "Ooh I'm gonna stick around, if you can't find me...don't look for me."

YoungJae raised his hand, "Everyone heard that right? We don't see him..Leggo."

Zelo laughed but worry filled his heart over you.

JongUp looked around, "Where's DaeHyun hyung?"

YongGuk grinned, "Who cares? Order food and drinks boys! We won again."

Cheering, everyone clanked cans of drinks, beer for YongGuk, soda for the others.

*Where is _________?*

 
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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!