Snatch.

I'm Not Her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5VyCDXusYGQ

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You and Zelo went on your last "date" together.

Even though you protested, Zelo paid for the meal and now the two of you were walking home together.

The two of you talked about various things, "Noona...are you scared?"

You looked at him, "Scared?"

"Of going to America?"

You shook your head, "No...I'm more afraid that you guys will forget about me."

Zelo whined, "Noona! You know that will never happen!"

You smiled, "I know.."

Suddenly, a black car stopped in front of the two of you.

The window rolled down, your eyes widened, your mom said, "Get in the car _________-ah."

Zelo glared at her, "I thought you said she's leaving tomorrow."

She rolled her eyes, "I changed my mind."

Zelo turned to you, "Noona."

You looked at him, he held his hand out, you took it, "RUN!"

The two of you ran the blocks to the house.

Taken aback, your mom screeched, "GO AFTER THEM!"

The two of you almost reached the house, but the car was faster.

Two men leaped out of the car and grabbed you, "NO LET ME GO! NO!"

Zelo cried, "NOONA!"

He tried to pry them off of you but they pushed him back and he fell onto the floor, "Ow!"

Your eyes widened in worry,"JunHong-ah!"

Fiercely glaring at the men, "You didn't have to hurt him!"

Snatching your arms from them, you bent down and said, "Let me see."

"I'm fine noona."

"Hand."

He glumly held it out, there was an angry, gushing gash on his hand.

You turned around and glowered at them, "See."

They were bewildered, never had someone yelled at them about hurting someone.

You sighed, "Clean it well. Don't be a baby and not use water. Ointment and bandage it, not too tight though. It's gonna take a while to heal..this is a big cut."

Your mom's eyes softened for a moment but her determination came back, "What are you waiting for? We need to go."

Instead of manhandling you, the two men said, "Um..miss...we have to go."

You hugged Zelo, "Bye JunHong-ah."

Then you entered the car silently.

Zelo watched the car go by and called YongGuk, "Hyung hyung get the other hyungs. Her mom came and took her right now!"

Soon, all the boys were in YongGuk's car going way over the speed limit.

Zelo called his mom, "Umma, do you happen to know when noona's flight is?"

"I think..6PM...tomorrow?"

Zelo glanced at the clock, it was 5:48PM.

"Arasso thanks umma."

He glumly stated, "Her flight is at 6."

They got into a traffic jam, DaeHyun clenched his fist, *Dammit. I have to give my letter to ________.*

He asked, "Hyung how far is the airport?"

"Well...we're supposed to be there by now...it's only a 10 minute drive from Zelo's house."

DaeHyun asked, "How far would it be if I ran?"

The boys all turned and stared at him.

DaeHyun opened the door and began running, *Wait for me __________-ah.*

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!