Shaken.

I'm Not Her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FVmUjrIf2QY

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After getting bubble tea with Zelo, you waited outside the cafe for DaeHyun like you promised.

The wind was blowing but it still wasn't too cold considering it was winter.

Snuggling into your scarf, you scanned the area for your boyfriend.

*Is he going to be late..?*

Shaking your head, *No..he would have told me...*

You looked down the road, hoping to see DaeHyun.

Your breath made puffs in the air.

Suddenly, someone pulled you into their chest and buried their face into your shoulder.

Taken aback, you squirmed, "Um..excuse me-"

"__________-ah."

You stopped at DaeHyun's voice.

Stepping back to look at him, DaeHyun shook his head and held you closer, "J-just stay. Don't look at me. Just stay like this."

*What happened..?*

He whispered, "Please."

You listened and stayed still, holding him and not looking at his face.

You could have sworn DaeHyun was crying but you knew better than to ask.

When you felt that he had calmed down, you slowly stepped back and grasped DaeHyun's face with your hands.

His eyes were downcast and he refused to look up.

Deciding to act like you didn't notice to help him feel better, you saw his bare neck and took off your scarf.

Wrapping it around him many times so that it covered his mouth, you tenderly whispered, "You can't keep your neck bare and catch a cold. You have too precious of a voice."

He met eyes with you, you smiled softly at him, "Let's go oppa."

Nodding, he held your hand.

Pulling you in one last time, you felt yourself against his chest, "Gomawo __________-ah."

You wrapped your arms around him and pecked his nose.

The two of you went your way, firmly grasping each other's hands and braving the cold air together.

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!