Day.

I'm Not Her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eV11ofQw4m0

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Tapping the desk with her hand, the teacher announced, "Alright. Winter break is in two weeks. I hope everyone is well aware that they have a midterm exam next week."

You made a face and wrote it down in your planner.

It was the same news all day, about this test or that test and whatnot.

Frankly, you wanted it to be done and over with.

Sighing, you rested your cheek on your hand.

"I expect perfection-"

The bell rang.

"Alright, class dismissed."

Yawning, you walked out of the room, drained and tired from having to hear all of the teachers' lectures the entire day.

Going to your locker to put your books away, someone hugged you from behind.

Smiling, you leaned into him and let out a sigh.

Facing DaeHyun, he gave you a worried look, "What's wrong? Are you sick?"

You shook your head, "Just tired."

He chuckled, "You LOOK tired. Like a panda bear, dark circles~"

You pouted and pushed him away.

"Hey hey. A CUTE panda bear."

Glaring at him, you closed your locker and marched off.

A playful smile was on his lips as he slung an arm around your shoulder and gave you a loud smooch on the cheek before running away.

Blushing as people stared enviously, you quickly entered your final class of the day.

Lazily staring outside, DaeHyun sat in his seat and dozed off.

A note was passed to him saying: Meet me at the back gates after school.

He looked around curiously, *The heck? Who sent me this?*

He texted you: ________-ah, go home with Zelo, I have to meet someone :(

You didn't reply.

He grew irked: YAH why aren't you answering your boyfriend's text?!

Still no reply.

He continued spamming you and texting you until a message came: It's called having a quiz! omo..54 text messages...have fun!

Smirking, the bell rang, DaeHyun slung his bag over his shoulder and walked out to the back gates.

He made sure he saw you off with Zelo before making his way over.

Cautiously approaching, "Um...you asked me to meet with you?"

DaeHyun tilted his head in confusion since no one seemed to be there.

"It's been a while DaeHyun oppa."

Turning around, his eyes widened and his bag dropped.

*No.*

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!