Care.

I'm Not Her.

 

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You went to the nurse and she felt your forehead, frowning.

"I thought the two of you were playing hooky but she actually does have a fever."

DaeHyun frowned at you.

"She has a mild cold. She should get better in a few weeks."

*That would explain the chills, cough and dizziness.*

DaeHyun nodded, "I'll take her home."

She agreed, "Let me just write out a pass for you two."

The nurse gave DaeHyun a pink slip and turned to you, "You should go home. Eat porridge, eat soup. Drink lots of water. Cold medicine should be enough."

Then she turned to DaeHyun, "And YOU should take very good care of her. There's only so much, a little adoration from the boyfriend wouldn't hurt."

Your face flamed, she laughed.

The two of you bowed and exited the school.

You let out a sneeze, DaeHyun smiled.

He bent down, "Get on."

You frantically shook your head, "NO no. I'm not THAT sick."

He shushed you, "Hurry up. My legs are hurting."

Sighing in defeat, you got on his back.

DaeHyun easily lifted you up and walked to your home.

You rested your cheek on his back and smiled in content.

"_________-ah?"

"Hmm?"

"Don't get hurt...okay?"

*Because of me.*

You thought he was referring to your sickness, "I won't. Don't worry. I'm a big girl."

He chuckled, "No you're my baby."

You blushed and became silent.

He laughed, "Speechless?"

"Dumbfounded."

You retorted, sarcastically.

He hoisted you up and you yelped, he laughed, "That's what you get for being sarcastic."

You pouted, "But you are too!"

The two of you bickered all the way to your home.

When you arrived, he knocked at the door but no one was home.

Trying the doorknob, he realized it was open and carried you inside, even though you argued.

"AHJUMMMMAAA!"

There was no reply, he tilted his head, "That's odd..normally she's home-oh. She's staying overnight at a friend's house..that lady..her and her gostop games.."

You laughed, "That's my aunt."

Coughing again, you turned your head so you wouldn't cough on DaeHyun.

His eyes softened, he carried you upstairs and set you down on your bed.

"Change, I'll make you something warm."

You frowned, "But you're the guest."

He scoffed, "Oh please. I've been to this house many more times than you've lived here."

You rolled your eyes, he closed the door and went downstairs.

Coughing again, "It's not even a bad cold.."

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!