Challenge.

I'm Not Her.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1xoTKc5V0C4&feature=channel&list=UL

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Your first week of school passed by uneventfully, that is, until friday hit.

After the bell signaled the end of the day, students fled the school.

"__________-AH!"

You turned to see JongUp, "Are you going to the hip hop club?"

You echoed him, "Hip hop..club?"

He nodded eagerly, "Yeah! Me and the others go every friday and sometimes on the weekends! Did Zelo tell you about it?"

You shook your head slowly, "No...."

JongUp blinked, "Oh. Well..hope to see you there!"

You nodded and waved to him.

Zelo came up to you, "BOO!"

"Hi."

"Aw, you're no fun."

Zelo pouted, sticking his lips out.

You rolled your eyes, "I wonder what the oppas think when you do that."

"They don't because. They never see it, speaking of them. You're free tonight right?"

You deadpanned, "Yes JunHong. Because I don't have a life-"

He grinned, "EXACTLY. Perfect! So you'll come with me right? Okay good settled."

"Do I get a say in this?"

"...No."

"...."

"Wear something...nice."

You mocked him, "Nice means a lot of things."

"I don't know! Figure it out woman!"

The two of you argued all the way home, until YongGuk came to pick you guys up.

You wore an off the shoulder, semi-crop top with white skinny jeans.

HimChan whistled, "You look...hot."

You blushed, "Umm...should I go change?"

"NO!" 

Five voices yelled at you.

YongGuk laughed, "Let's go~"

He drove into a deserted parking lot, "We go on by foot!"

YoungJae muttered, "What is this, Robin Hood?"

"Shaddap fool."

He opened a door to a shabby shed, and pressed an elevator button.

HimChan grinned, "Welcome to our haven!"

Your eyes widened as loud music pumped in the air, girls wearing short skirts, dresses and shorts with tight shirts danced, people were showing off their dance moves.

JongUp whispered, "Just in time too."

You tilted your head, *For what?*

"LADIES AND GENTS, WELCOME TO OUR WEEKLY RAP BATTLE!"

Loud cheering erupted, "First we have...BLOCK B!"

A blonde boy, who you assumed was the leader grabbed the mic and rapped: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i42sbhvyDvo

Attention, please excuse me
I’m going to bring down some guys on the top.
I’ll rise in an instant you won’t know what to do
U better run run watch your mouth! The next target is you
For real, original. My career is to shame those posers
You did not work hard enough so there’s no success
Who dares to call me their rival?

At you, he pointed at random people, but when he turned to you, he winked.

"Whoo~ You've got the "attention" of the leader of Block B."

You made a face while YongGuk laughed.

"ANYONE HERE THAT'S GONNA CHALLENGE THAT?"

YoungJae grinned, "Go YongGuk hyung."

YongGuk came on to the stage and: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hAHVfsHQcxI

That's just not it

Is music a joke? It's not for us

Because you're like that I'm like this

If you weren't like that would I be like this?

Just stop and quit it

Just go away over there

You cheered, impressed by YongGuk's rhythm, Zico frowned and spit out with the rest of his friends:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5OZ8Alicd8c

People screamed for them and chanted, "NANRINA NANRINA NANRINA!"

Still, B.A.P didn't look phased, they simply looked bored and yawned, "Let's show them what No Mercy means."

You gave them a curious look, *What's Zelo doing up there?*

Cheers and screams grew louder as DaeHyun sang with YoungJae, *Wow.*

After another line of YongGuk's rap,

Only those who really know look up to us

We are the main

They follow us they know

Music is a fun game

Your jaw dropped when you heard Zelo, 

The level of our style is different

We makin classic

I'll let you feel it for real

Now these are the words you'll be afraid of

We will be back

When they finished, Block B raised their hands in surrender, "We know when we're beat."

Zico slapped hands with B.A.P, "Damn you guys don't quit."

He winked at you, "Hey cutie."

You gave him a look and turned away.

"ANYONE WHO WILL CHALLENGE B.A.P?"

B.A.P looked around smugly.

"We will."

You turned around and your eyes widened.

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!