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They stood opposite her,across the plain. They were 3 figures,tall and blurred,hidden in the shadows. Ah Sa studied them. They were hidden in the shadows and she could not see them clearly but she could feel their power. They were powerful and dangerous. She would have to be careful.

'What do all of you  want?'Ah Sa asked. Silence. The 3 figures did not reply her. Suddenly,whoosh-Calvin,Wu Chun and Jiro now surrounded Ah Sa,having crossed the plain in a few seconds. They looked at her with empty eyes,eyes that could send shivers down anyones' spine. Energy,in the form of green light,radiated from their bodies. They were dressed in the black uniforms that only Farenheit had the right to wear. Their uniforms represented their immense power. No one else had the right to wear these uniforms simply because they were not powerful enough. These uniforms labelled them as the demon realm's best fighters.

A small smile played on Ah Sa's lips. 'What do all of you want ?'she repeated softly.

'What do you think?'Calvin asked. His voice was softer,softer than the slightest whisper of midsummer's breeze. But yet it had a frightening tone to it. She whipped out her sword in reply to Calvin's question. In response,the guys took out their weapons too. Soon,sounds of fighting filled the air. Swords clashed against each other and bodies moved gracefully,twisting to avoid the sharp,deadly sword blades of their opponents. But suddenly,in the middle of the battle,the 3 guys suddenly disappeared into thin air,leaving a bewildered Ah Sa on the deserted plain.

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also thks to lerruh for the awesome poster!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!