Chapter 1: omo, i wanna cry.. this story is so sad..
nice story.. keep it up.. :)

Wait they both died omg I'm sad but it's so sweet

So they both died? I dunno. >.<

it's beautiful!<br />
<3

waaaaaaaaaaaaa charlene T_T<br />
THIS IS REALLY GREAT .<br />
I CRY . LOL<br />
THE ENDING IS BEAUTIFUL .<br />
Hands in hands , hearts with hearts *_*<br />
thanks charlene for wonderful storys :D !<br />
ChocolateMIT<3

:'( <br />
im teary eyed.<br />
the way you write is so captivating.<br />
its beautiful.<br />
i love how they part happy, and. <br />
AGH.<br />
bittersweet. :/<br />

aww that was so sad and sweet. like romeo and juliet >< thanks for making me read this~ <3

I like it ...so sad .... Thanks it was very nice

Love it! It's so sad that they die :( But I really like the one-shot :D Keep up the good work~ ^-^

Wow so much blood! You should have written it into a 3 shot though! So the paragraphs can *ahem* space out a little. HEHE.