coney island

invisible string
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-i'm sitting on a bench in coney island wondering where did my baby go?-

 “Hey.”

 

 “Hey,” Jennie rested one side of her body against the door and tilted her head to smile at him. “What’s up, big brain?”

 

 Sehun rolled his eyes at the nickname. It was clear he had been playing something strenuous. His shirt clung to his body with sweat and his wide basketball shorts made his thin legs look even thinner. Sehun smirked before ing something in between their bodies. Jennie’s eyes widened at the sight of her favorite treat. Sehun held his head high, knowing very well he could get her to do anything now that there was ice cream in the equation. Her eyes sparkled, the smile on her face was priceless. He blinked the reverie that took him for a while before clearing his throat.

 

 “Come out,” he said, gesturing towards the porch.

 

 Jennie took her packet out of his hand and they settled on the wooden stairs, thighs touching as the wind drove through their hairs. Jennie tore off the packet and began eating while he just stared at his house right before hers. A melancholy took his face. Jennie knew he was thinking about his father who was not there anymore.

 

 “You...wanna go to prom with me?” He asked out of the blue a while later.

 

 With two big bites of the ice cream in both her cheeks, Jennie blinked with wide eyes, pausing her chewing. Sehun laughed at her cute face before patting her cheek. “Fine, eat first. Then we’ll talk.”

 

 Jennie swallowed the ice cream inside with all her might. “Prom? I thought there are only guys at your school?”

 

 “Yes, we were told to bring a partner. And...guys will go with guys if they want to.”

 

 “You...will take me?”

 

 “If you say yes, this one’s yours,” he waved his ice cream before her eyes, tempting her with it. Jennie eyed him suspiciously and he made a face at her before going back to staring at everything else. At that moment, something sparked. On this cloudy afternoon, Jennie felt the sunshine radiating from his body. She wondered when it became like that for her, Sehun began to look like a man, and not the skinny boy she used to beat other guys for. Perhaps it was the fact that this friendship had been thrown to the back of her closet after starting high school, the long stretch of days they had spent without speaking to each other. The moles on his milky skin became more attractive and she found herself staring at his brown eyes that got lost in the folds of his skin when he would smile.

 

 His hair danced with the wind, which also picked up the sticky perspiration from the jersey he wore of some famous soccer club. His hands around the cold treat made her look twice. When did he become such a fine man? 

 

 “So...what do you think? Am I good enough for you to be seen with me?”

 

 “W-What do you mean?”

 

 “You were checking me out...so...what do you think?”

 

 “I was not.”

 

 “You were checking me out.”

 

 “No.

 

 “Whatever, I don’t care. I know I’m not much of a looker but still, you are going with me. I won’t take a no. I swear I’ll try to look good that day. 25th, seven p.m. and you’ll be ready. Just wear anything, okay? I don’t mind. Pajamas are alright too. Please understand, I feel like they’ll be secretly grading us…”

 

 Jennie in a breath, nodding. “Okay, I’ll go.”

 

 “Thanks. You saved me--”

 

 “Give me the ice cream,” she opened her palm for it and with a grin on his face, he gave it to her. “Red...let’s wear red,” Jennie continued, tearing open the plastic. Sehun nodded, mumbling something to himself. “There will be a lot of food, right?”

 

 Sehun nodded again, “Definitely, yes. We can just sit there and stuff our faces.”

 

 “No, let’s dance too.”

 

 “Okay...okay.”

 

 They sat there in silence until Jennie finished the ice cream. Sehun sighed, as if exhausted from the day and laid his head on her shoulder. Jennie felt worms crawl on the insides of her skin. Her heart skipped a beat and what was worse was that she even noticed it. But she let the day pass and sat before her homework, trying to figure out her feelings for her best friend.

 

 He had looked good that day. It was clear he didn’t have a friend in his school because no one even bothered about him, which made everything else very peaceful and enjoyable for the two of them. “Then you’ll go to my school’s prom too,” she had included in the middle of all the random things they were talking about on the rooftop of his school.

 

 Sehun had nodded, “But...I don’t know. You’ve got cool friends now. It will look...unflattering, no?”

 

 “You? Unflattering?” Jennie had laughed at his choice of words. “No, Sehun. I don’t know what kind of mirror you’re looking at these days. You’re handsome. If you were in my school, you would have been a king.”

 

 He chuckled but his voice died down as the wind flew through the gaps between their bodies. Jennie’s heart bloomed with a kind of excitement she didn’t know she was capable of. Her red dress pooled around her as she sat beside him on the floor. Their eyes met in glitters and Jennie wanted to touch his face. It was at that moment she knew that she liked him.

 

 Sehun went to her own prom with her. Weirdly enough, he had let her paint his nails too. It was like he was returning a favor but Jennie didn’t want it to be that way at all. She showed him off to her friends, hoping they got the message that Jennie was not dependent on her high school friends and if they didn’t want to hang out with her, she had Sehun. 

 

 It was written on his face that he felt intimidated in an unknown circle. Girls always made his palms sweaty, regardless of whether he liked them or didn’t. So Sehun held Jennie’s hand, wondering if his hair was alright as she weaved themselves through the crowd to dance. But that didn’t really work as Sehun was just really too awkward and shy in a new crowd who sounded as judgemental as one of his aunts from his mother’s side.

 

 “Let’s get out of here, Jen,” he whispered into her ear, his smooth lips touching her skin and making her blush.

 

 She had nodded without even hearing what he had said. He held her hand and pulled her out of the dancing school, breathing in largely as the stuffy air left them. 

 

 “So where do we go now?” She asked.

 

 “You wanna go to my house and dance in my room? Mom’s not home and Rim doesn’t really mind so…” he asked, pulling at the tie around his neck. Jennie raised her hands and helped him remove it. “I’m sorry...it’s just, I don’t feel very good.”

 

 “I understand, Sehun.”

 

 “Thank you, Jennie.”

 

 So they chose a song from a violin playlist and played it in Sehun’s speakers, the ones he had fixed himself. Jennie held him close, teaching him to sway with the music. She remembered the number of times she had to remind him not to be so s

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Innocentsoul123
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Chapter 34: This was such a fun ride. I binged read it all in 3-4 hours. It was such a sweet and cute story. I've barely come across a cute story which doesn't have pacing issue and not a drag. I liked all the characters in this story even Junmyeon and Jennie. Both of their situations as silent lovers is understandable, both of their fair share of edgy moments but I'm glad non of them acted y and tried to intentionally create any misunderstanding. I think even if the letters went to the right address then also nothing was ever going to work between Joohyun-Junmyeon and Sehun-Jennie cause Junmyeon was just the least terrible guy out of all the people Joohyun met so she latched onto the idea of holding onto him, that wasn't truly love tbh. It was just her way to hold onto life during all difficulties. Junmyeon too only held onto the idea that someone could genuinely like him when everyone around him is just after his money. If the letters did reach him and they eventually did start dating, it would be just to escape their own realities and with the way Junmyeon behaved so insanely when he met her years later in closure chapter, it just shows their relationship would've reached a rock bottom eventually cause a time would come that he will lose his composure and patience so in his haste he wouldn't even let her have an equal chance of say in the matters or arguments. Same with other case where Jennie is in love with Sehun, although she can genuinely like him, keep him happy and try to mold herself but they're both just too different. Not that it's a bad thing cause Sehun truly do need a happy person to cheer him on but they can't see eye to and eye on matters. Jennie is a social butterfly while the crowd scares Sehun, sometimes love can't be the only common ground in relationship. Sadly in Jennie's case even that was just one sided cause it's so evident throughout their moments that Sehun hold onto her because she was there during the tough moments of his life. Nothing about their interactions was ever romantic to him so even if they had settled down together it would be because Sehun is are too scared or too busy to actually take interest in someone so he'll just settle with Jennie cause she knows him well. He'll never really know what true love actually is cause he'll mistaken familial love he has for Jennie as really love. That type of relationship would seem good in starting phase but would grow over time especially on Jennie's behalf who is truly in love with him and it'll eventually even crack their beautiful friendship. Joohyun and Sehun however just clicks instantly even from the start. Joohyun on the other hand is perfect for Sehun because she grew up from her experience positively. Her actual personality and situations are relatable to Sehun so he relates to her while her approaching method are fast forwarded and heart fluttering which Sehun really needs in life while Sehun himself on the other hand gives Joohyun genuine feelings which she has always craved for. Together they both comfort, grow and heal each other. Both breakthrough their own shells together. I was sad around the chapters when Joohyun gave Sehun a hard time but at the same time her situation is understandable. There was so many coincidences in their story with Sehun ignoring obvious signs about her identity that she must've thought he intentionally approached her, it doesn't help that she has terrible past experiences even with Junmyeon that her defense mechanism kicked in. However I'm glad towards the end it was a sweet ending. I think my favorite moments from this story is the bedroom scene where Sehun showed Joohyun how to dance and their kisses.🥰 Next comes their wedding moments which are exactly how I imagined to be given Sehun's personality in this story. To be honest I was getting tired of seeing toxic Sehun in most stories (ngl I dig that Sehun in stories) but haven't come across much stories where he was a genuinely such a cutie pie😘. I do remember reading a positive Sehun story back when I first joined this site which was really good but the story was too slow paced and slow-burn for my liking. I still have to finish that one 😂 I'm really curious about Yerim and Jongin. Are both of them over or they'll eventually find their way back to each other? Thank you for the beautiful story authornim ❤️
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Chapter 34: Hi author velvelatte!!

I thought the story was done but I was wrong. This is even more beautiful..I am glad that Rimi got through all the bullying but I do wonder if she and Jongin ever patched up their friendship. I guess they might not have..

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Chapter 33: Hi author velvelatte!!

This is so beautiful. Thank you for this story.

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Chapter 31: Hi author velvelatte!!

Wow! There has been so much growth for the two of them in the last few chapters!! However it is especially for Irene. I love every moment of it. I have a feeling that she would maybe give him another chance. Maybe not right away but later probably. Or maybe not. I do not know but I am alright with the outcome even if it is not the ideal happy ending for Sehun. So long as Irene is happy and Sehun somewhat happy.

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Chapter 22: hi author velvelatte!!

it makes me sad to think how she will feel like once she finds out what sehun has been doing to her letters..intercepting them in the stead of junmyeon..will she be mad??will jun be mad??how will it be revealed??through jennie??on accident??will sehun piece it together??

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Chapter 17: hi author rosa!!

these last few chapters have been a roller coaster ride but a good one..one that is necessary and i enjoyed reading it so much..all the emotions were so strong that i felt them even through my screen..just wow..i am speechless by it all..

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Chapter 9: hi author rosa!!

uh ohs i sense some danger coming especially if junmyeon is very much like this about irene..

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Chapter 8: hi author rosa!!

the last chapter is my second most favorite chapter of all..and i hate that jenny did what she did..i can see why she did though..however that is so mean of her..

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Chapter 6: hi author rosa!!

i absouletly love this chapter!!but i am also sad with sehun about the letters possibly stopping..

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