the beginning: XXVIII

The Theory of Life

 

XXVIII

 

The infirmary tent is gone, the cots, the equipment and most of the prosthetics have been rendered nearly useless after the flashbombs — a new military device that sends out a blinding light draining everything of colour and is capable of burning skin to a crisp. Another type of explosive had been dropped only a few moments later, spreading fragments of sharp metal every where when it blew up.

 

Yongsun hurriedly rushes back and forth between the many soldiers lying on their uniform jackets, dabbing their wounds with wet cloths. The blonde doctor is among them, her neck bandaged by Yongsun’s coat. Yongsun has taken over the role as Head Doctor, now that the real doctor is incapacitated. She begrudgingly settles into her new role, barking commands, adjusting steel joints and ‘decorating’ soldiers. 

 

Moonbyul is lying on one of the jackets stomach down, revealing the pieces of shrapnel imbedded deeply in her back. They stick out of her skin like small fins, blood seeps out of the wounds covering most of Moonbyul’s back with crimson lines. Yongsun hastily makes her way towards her when she sees one of the nurses holding a blowtorch and a large tweezer, ready to ‘decorate’ the sergeant’s scarred back. «No,» Yongsun grabs the nurse’s wrist, «we will not decorate the sergeant’s entire back,» she says defiantly, «we will remove all the pieces, then replace what can not be salvaged with steel.»

 

Yongsun knows it is a desperate attempt at keeping Moonbyul alive — no, human — let her still be a part of the old world, not the new, Yongsun prays as she gently places her hand on the Moonbyul’s back who flinches and tenses under the touch. «Let her be,» Yongsun whispers.

 

 

 

 

Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!
Despereauxx
updated. done. finished. my brain needs a rest. will probably sleep. thank you for everything ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ <3

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Wasp16 #1
Chapter 62: Wow...the way you've portrayed the reality of the human condition, war and love.

Just beautiful
somebbboy
#2
Chapter 62: absolutely beautiful
thc_178 #3
Chapter 62: What a masterpiece!
The Theory of Life is there created by us and also destroyed by us.
It can have different definitions imo.
Hope author-nim will continue to create more great stories. ?
JustMe
#4
Oh my god, I've been searching and searching and I'm so glad I stumbled on this masterpiece.

I'm a fan. , your writing is beautiful! Omfg, thank you for such art. I finished the whole story in a day. It was that good.
ThatOneBi
#5
Chapter 62: The story was very interesting and it was amazing. Thank you author-nim for creating this amazing masterpiece ~
gay4pineapples
#6
Chapter 62: i haven’t been here for a while, but i’m gonna catch up soon. thank you for finishing this story :))
diadetak #7
Chapter 62: I read this in one go and I'm glad i found this masterpiece

This writing is really warm, idk how to explain it
This is too beautiful
brokecorgi
#8
This was the first story I read on aff before making an account n now that I looked at it after moths I realized that I had not subscribed and upvoted this great piece. I used to eagerly wait for you to update this story. Thank you for writing this beautiful story author-nim ^_^
TagalogMamamoo
#9
Chapter 62: I can’t believe I was scared to read this because I thought it’d be a long and difficult read. Turned out to be the opposite. :)

It’s a happy ending that still pinched my heart. Thank you for putting up a great effort in writing this beautiful piece. <3
WolfieGrowler #10
Chapter 62: A very human creation. Glad they are able to experience peace, because as Yongsun has discovered, peace is a journey and process. Much like her theory. Fantastic that she’s able to discover a way out of living that theory...I’ve been there and sometimes still find myself faintly experiencing it. It mirrors the steel taking over flesh- the inhumanity overlapping humanity she finds so agonizing. Creates lots of suffering. You clinched it dude :)