the beginning: XVIII

The Theory of Life

 

XVIII

 

«Your name, nurse,» the blonde doctor asks, arms crossed. «Ahn Hyejin,» the young nurse answers without looking up. The blonde doctor berates her for not heeding Yongsun’s request and ends by saying: if it happens again, you might as well go home.

 

The doctor turns on her heels, exiting the tent, the flaps flying behind her. Yongsun watches her go then shifts her gaze to the nurse who is still looking solemnly at the ground. «I didn’t know it was this bad,» the nurse whispers, kicking away some small pebbles.

 

Yongsun frowns, wondering how someone could be so naive as to think that this war, or any war, could be anything but gruesome. «Why did the government request your presence at the frontier, then?» Yongsun asks through gritted teeth.

 

«I volunteered,» the nurse replies quietly. Yongsun immediately drops her gaze to her lap, taking in her own blood-soaked uniform. She begins to shake, clawing desperately at the blood stuck to her hands and underneath her nails. «Leave!» She shouts, and the young nurse scrambles out of the tent.

 

 

 

 

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updated. done. finished. my brain needs a rest. will probably sleep. thank you for everything ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ <3

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Wasp16 #1
Chapter 62: Wow...the way you've portrayed the reality of the human condition, war and love.

Just beautiful
somebbboy
#2
Chapter 62: absolutely beautiful
thc_178 #3
Chapter 62: What a masterpiece!
The Theory of Life is there created by us and also destroyed by us.
It can have different definitions imo.
Hope author-nim will continue to create more great stories. ?
JustMe
#4
Oh my god, I've been searching and searching and I'm so glad I stumbled on this masterpiece.

I'm a fan. , your writing is beautiful! Omfg, thank you for such art. I finished the whole story in a day. It was that good.
ThatOneBi
#5
Chapter 62: The story was very interesting and it was amazing. Thank you author-nim for creating this amazing masterpiece ~
gay4pineapples
#6
Chapter 62: i haven’t been here for a while, but i’m gonna catch up soon. thank you for finishing this story :))
diadetak #7
Chapter 62: I read this in one go and I'm glad i found this masterpiece

This writing is really warm, idk how to explain it
This is too beautiful
brokecorgi
#8
This was the first story I read on aff before making an account n now that I looked at it after moths I realized that I had not subscribed and upvoted this great piece. I used to eagerly wait for you to update this story. Thank you for writing this beautiful story author-nim ^_^
TagalogMamamoo
#9
Chapter 62: I can’t believe I was scared to read this because I thought it’d be a long and difficult read. Turned out to be the opposite. :)

It’s a happy ending that still pinched my heart. Thank you for putting up a great effort in writing this beautiful piece. <3
WolfieGrowler #10
Chapter 62: A very human creation. Glad they are able to experience peace, because as Yongsun has discovered, peace is a journey and process. Much like her theory. Fantastic that she’s able to discover a way out of living that theory...I’ve been there and sometimes still find myself faintly experiencing it. It mirrors the steel taking over flesh- the inhumanity overlapping humanity she finds so agonizing. Creates lots of suffering. You clinched it dude :)