the beginning: IX

The Theory of Life

 

IX

 

Yongsun places thinly cut plates of steel over burnt flesh, wrinkling her nose at the foul stench. She can not believe that the military is going to send them out onto the field again, it is cruelty at its worst. With guilt in her heart, Yongsun admits to herself that she will not see this soldier again.

 

Her hands shake, this is not right, this is not right, her mind screams as the steel sinks effortlessly into the skin, as if it had been destined to be there all along. She pulls her hands away quickly, stands up and wraps her arms around herself.

 

She sees a doctor, a real doctor, not a phoney one like her, scribbling something on a notepad. She is Yongsun’s superior, the one that taught her how to ‘heal’ by covering wounds with steel, but Yongsun finds that contradictory because she is destroying what makes us human. The doctor’s blonde fringe falls in front of her face, she pushes it away but it falls again. Yongsun lets out a cough, trying to attract the doctor’s attention.

 

She stops scribbling, looks at Yongsun with remarkably soft eyes, brows lifting innocently. Yongsun feels her blood boil; how can the doctor stand there and do nothing else but obey the commands given by the government? The world is descending into madness, losing all sense of direction, humanity is decaying, steel is flourishing. «Doctor, the patient has been fully decorated.» Yongsun says, dropping her gaze.

 

 

 

 

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updated. done. finished. my brain needs a rest. will probably sleep. thank you for everything ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ <3

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Wasp16 #1
Chapter 62: Wow...the way you've portrayed the reality of the human condition, war and love.

Just beautiful
somebbboy
#2
Chapter 62: absolutely beautiful
thc_178 #3
Chapter 62: What a masterpiece!
The Theory of Life is there created by us and also destroyed by us.
It can have different definitions imo.
Hope author-nim will continue to create more great stories. ?
JustMe
#4
Oh my god, I've been searching and searching and I'm so glad I stumbled on this masterpiece.

I'm a fan. , your writing is beautiful! Omfg, thank you for such art. I finished the whole story in a day. It was that good.
ThatOneBi
#5
Chapter 62: The story was very interesting and it was amazing. Thank you author-nim for creating this amazing masterpiece ~
gay4pineapples
#6
Chapter 62: i haven’t been here for a while, but i’m gonna catch up soon. thank you for finishing this story :))
diadetak #7
Chapter 62: I read this in one go and I'm glad i found this masterpiece

This writing is really warm, idk how to explain it
This is too beautiful
brokecorgi
#8
This was the first story I read on aff before making an account n now that I looked at it after moths I realized that I had not subscribed and upvoted this great piece. I used to eagerly wait for you to update this story. Thank you for writing this beautiful story author-nim ^_^
TagalogMamamoo
#9
Chapter 62: I can’t believe I was scared to read this because I thought it’d be a long and difficult read. Turned out to be the opposite. :)

It’s a happy ending that still pinched my heart. Thank you for putting up a great effort in writing this beautiful piece. <3
WolfieGrowler #10
Chapter 62: A very human creation. Glad they are able to experience peace, because as Yongsun has discovered, peace is a journey and process. Much like her theory. Fantastic that she’s able to discover a way out of living that theory...I’ve been there and sometimes still find myself faintly experiencing it. It mirrors the steel taking over flesh- the inhumanity overlapping humanity she finds so agonizing. Creates lots of suffering. You clinched it dude :)