the beginning: XXVI

The Theory of Life

 

XXVI

 

The war goes like this: the marching of mechanical feet, the rumble of battle tanks, the sound of fighter jets zooming above their heads, the strained screams of machines and humans — this is the future, it is happening now.

 

Yongsun is in the infirmary fiddling with the new hologram-pad that she has been given to write reports on. The hologram-pad (or ‘H-PA test 1’ they call it) is like a small scroll that one has to pull out to use, but instead of paper there is a transparent screen. Yongsun writes on it slowly, cursing when she accidentally presses the wrong symbol.

 

She is not the only one struggling to use the new technology, the blonde doctor has gone through three hologram-pads already, swearing (Scheiße!) in her mother language as she tosses another one into a crate of used electronics. Yongsun throws her hologram to the side with a huff, deciding to write the report by hand.

 

There is a loud ripple across the sky, a sound like thunder. Yongsun stares up at the tent ceiling, dropping her pencil. Her superior, the blonde doctor, frowns, chewing on her lip as she violently pushes the tent flaps open. A bright light flashes before them making them both squint, the doctor backs away from the opening, she turns, hands shielding her eyes. A warning cry reaches Yongsun: «Get down!» and she dives to the ground, covering her ears.

 

 

 

 

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updated. done. finished. my brain needs a rest. will probably sleep. thank you for everything ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ <3

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Wasp16 #1
Chapter 62: Wow...the way you've portrayed the reality of the human condition, war and love.

Just beautiful
somebbboy
#2
Chapter 62: absolutely beautiful
thc_178 #3
Chapter 62: What a masterpiece!
The Theory of Life is there created by us and also destroyed by us.
It can have different definitions imo.
Hope author-nim will continue to create more great stories. ?
JustMe
#4
Oh my god, I've been searching and searching and I'm so glad I stumbled on this masterpiece.

I'm a fan. , your writing is beautiful! Omfg, thank you for such art. I finished the whole story in a day. It was that good.
ThatOneBi
#5
Chapter 62: The story was very interesting and it was amazing. Thank you author-nim for creating this amazing masterpiece ~
gay4pineapples
#6
Chapter 62: i haven’t been here for a while, but i’m gonna catch up soon. thank you for finishing this story :))
diadetak #7
Chapter 62: I read this in one go and I'm glad i found this masterpiece

This writing is really warm, idk how to explain it
This is too beautiful
brokecorgi
#8
This was the first story I read on aff before making an account n now that I looked at it after moths I realized that I had not subscribed and upvoted this great piece. I used to eagerly wait for you to update this story. Thank you for writing this beautiful story author-nim ^_^
TagalogMamamoo
#9
Chapter 62: I can’t believe I was scared to read this because I thought it’d be a long and difficult read. Turned out to be the opposite. :)

It’s a happy ending that still pinched my heart. Thank you for putting up a great effort in writing this beautiful piece. <3
WolfieGrowler #10
Chapter 62: A very human creation. Glad they are able to experience peace, because as Yongsun has discovered, peace is a journey and process. Much like her theory. Fantastic that she’s able to discover a way out of living that theory...I’ve been there and sometimes still find myself faintly experiencing it. It mirrors the steel taking over flesh- the inhumanity overlapping humanity she finds so agonizing. Creates lots of suffering. You clinched it dude :)