the beginning: XIX

The Theory of Life

 

XIX

 

A week later, Yongsun is standing outside the general’s tent trying not to listen to the heated conversation inside. She stares up at the blank sky, hearing gunshots and reimagining them as birdsongs. Something from inside the tent grabs her attention, a crash perhaps, or something being thrown. She presses her ear against the closed flap.

 

She leans in too close, loosing her balance she stumbles inside. The officers all turn their heads, staring at Yongsun with stoney faces, except for Sergeant Moon who smirks, looking less surprised and more impressed by Yongsun’s sudden appearance.

 

«General,» Yongsun straightens herself, «I’ll… I’ll wait for you in the infirmary,» she mutters and turns to leave, red-faced with embarrassment. When she gets outside she cowers in shame, the soldiers around the tent stop comparing the shininess of their steel flesh to stare at her.

 

Yongsun feels someone tugging at her and immediately pulls away from the warmth, almost falling backwards. She looks up seeing Sergeant Moon staring down at her. Only now does she notice that the sergeant has faint creases on her eyelids and piercing brown eyes. Yongsun’s knees go weak at the faint smile on the sergeant’s lips.

 

 

 

 

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updated. done. finished. my brain needs a rest. will probably sleep. thank you for everything ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ <3

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Wasp16 #1
Chapter 62: Wow...the way you've portrayed the reality of the human condition, war and love.

Just beautiful
somebbboy
#2
Chapter 62: absolutely beautiful
thc_178 #3
Chapter 62: What a masterpiece!
The Theory of Life is there created by us and also destroyed by us.
It can have different definitions imo.
Hope author-nim will continue to create more great stories. ?
JustMe
#4
Oh my god, I've been searching and searching and I'm so glad I stumbled on this masterpiece.

I'm a fan. , your writing is beautiful! Omfg, thank you for such art. I finished the whole story in a day. It was that good.
ThatOneBi
#5
Chapter 62: The story was very interesting and it was amazing. Thank you author-nim for creating this amazing masterpiece ~
gay4pineapples
#6
Chapter 62: i haven’t been here for a while, but i’m gonna catch up soon. thank you for finishing this story :))
diadetak #7
Chapter 62: I read this in one go and I'm glad i found this masterpiece

This writing is really warm, idk how to explain it
This is too beautiful
brokecorgi
#8
This was the first story I read on aff before making an account n now that I looked at it after moths I realized that I had not subscribed and upvoted this great piece. I used to eagerly wait for you to update this story. Thank you for writing this beautiful story author-nim ^_^
TagalogMamamoo
#9
Chapter 62: I can’t believe I was scared to read this because I thought it’d be a long and difficult read. Turned out to be the opposite. :)

It’s a happy ending that still pinched my heart. Thank you for putting up a great effort in writing this beautiful piece. <3
WolfieGrowler #10
Chapter 62: A very human creation. Glad they are able to experience peace, because as Yongsun has discovered, peace is a journey and process. Much like her theory. Fantastic that she’s able to discover a way out of living that theory...I’ve been there and sometimes still find myself faintly experiencing it. It mirrors the steel taking over flesh- the inhumanity overlapping humanity she finds so agonizing. Creates lots of suffering. You clinched it dude :)