the beginning: VIII

The Theory of Life

 

VIII

 

’For all that we have, for all that we are’ is written in red, perhaps blood, on a half-torn wall. Yongsun simply looks at the words, but does not bother to read or understand them. She realises, as she walks away from the wall, that it could have been written by anyone: a soldier, an anarchist, a rebel, or someone from the regiment. There are so many sides in this war, Yongsun has lost track of all the people who are fighting. All she knows is that the soldiers in the white uniforms with intimidating masks covering their faces are the ones who are protecting her country.

 

Yongsun is placed in the infirmary, much to her confusion, she is not a doctor, she is a newly graduated woman with an engineering degree, she thought she would be producing prosthetic limbs, not… this.

 

It is horrible, Yongsun discovers that steel is replacing skin, inch by inch, it swallows the body as flesh is covered by shiny grey plates. Ethics and morals thrown out the window, soldiers are being saved from the brink of death only to be sent out to the frontier again as humans with ticking hearts and bodies that are no longer their own.

 

Yongsun is shocked at what the world has become and what it expects her to do. She does not want to be a part of this monstrosity, does not want to play around with fate — it is wild, reckless and can not be controlled — but humans do as they please and challenge any thing that might stand in the way of their own interests or what they think is best for humanity.

 

 

 

 

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updated. done. finished. my brain needs a rest. will probably sleep. thank you for everything ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ <3

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Wasp16 #1
Chapter 62: Wow...the way you've portrayed the reality of the human condition, war and love.

Just beautiful
somebbboy
#2
Chapter 62: absolutely beautiful
thc_178 #3
Chapter 62: What a masterpiece!
The Theory of Life is there created by us and also destroyed by us.
It can have different definitions imo.
Hope author-nim will continue to create more great stories. ?
JustMe
#4
Oh my god, I've been searching and searching and I'm so glad I stumbled on this masterpiece.

I'm a fan. , your writing is beautiful! Omfg, thank you for such art. I finished the whole story in a day. It was that good.
ThatOneBi
#5
Chapter 62: The story was very interesting and it was amazing. Thank you author-nim for creating this amazing masterpiece ~
gay4pineapples
#6
Chapter 62: i haven’t been here for a while, but i’m gonna catch up soon. thank you for finishing this story :))
diadetak #7
Chapter 62: I read this in one go and I'm glad i found this masterpiece

This writing is really warm, idk how to explain it
This is too beautiful
brokecorgi
#8
This was the first story I read on aff before making an account n now that I looked at it after moths I realized that I had not subscribed and upvoted this great piece. I used to eagerly wait for you to update this story. Thank you for writing this beautiful story author-nim ^_^
TagalogMamamoo
#9
Chapter 62: I can’t believe I was scared to read this because I thought it’d be a long and difficult read. Turned out to be the opposite. :)

It’s a happy ending that still pinched my heart. Thank you for putting up a great effort in writing this beautiful piece. <3
WolfieGrowler #10
Chapter 62: A very human creation. Glad they are able to experience peace, because as Yongsun has discovered, peace is a journey and process. Much like her theory. Fantastic that she’s able to discover a way out of living that theory...I’ve been there and sometimes still find myself faintly experiencing it. It mirrors the steel taking over flesh- the inhumanity overlapping humanity she finds so agonizing. Creates lots of suffering. You clinched it dude :)