Not an update
Strawberries and CigarettesHey guys, just wanted to give you all a heads up. I went in a edited they story a bit. Nothing major at all. just i wasn't satisfiyed with the subplot of the story nor was i with the actually plot its self. However nothing has changed drastically. I just went in and edited the seventh chapter just a paragraph here and there, just to get the story developing more. All i did was went in and changed Marks thoughts towards Donghyuck and himself. I wanted to give Mark and Donghyuck a bit of an eternal confilct with themselves and each other just to make the story more intersting. Again nothing drastic just subtle enough to be there. So mostly just the subplot was changed. If you want to go an reread the seventh chapter and so on that up to you. You dont have too. I will however be adding the new subplot to future chapters. Also, i was wondering if i could get feed back on what to add to this story to make it more of a hook to readers in future chapters. If you have any ideas to add even if its subtle i will gladly take into consideration. So please let me know. I'm always open for ideas. I hope you guys are enjoying the story, and hope to understand form my point of veiw of of why i edited the story. They story is till the story I just wanted to give it a little more flare is all. Hope you guys are having a great day/night. Love ya! ~ Joey :)
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