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Strawberries and Cigarettes

Hey guys, just wanted to give you all a heads up. I went in a edited they story a bit. Nothing major at all. just i wasn't satisfiyed with the subplot of the story nor was i with the actually plot its self. However nothing has changed drastically. I just went in and edited the seventh chapter just a paragraph here and there, just to get the story developing more. All i did was went in and changed Marks thoughts towards Donghyuck and himself. I wanted to give Mark and Donghyuck a bit of an eternal confilct with themselves and each other just to make the story more intersting. Again nothing drastic just subtle enough to be there. So mostly just the subplot was changed. If you want to go an reread the seventh chapter and so on that up to you. You dont have too. I will however be adding the new subplot to future chapters. Also, i was wondering if i could get feed back on what to add to this story to make it more of a hook to readers in future chapters. If you have any ideas to add  even if its subtle i will gladly take into consideration. So please let me know. I'm always open for ideas. I hope you guys are enjoying the story, and hope to understand form my point of veiw of of why i edited the story. They story is till the story I just wanted to give it a little more flare is all. Hope you guys are having a great day/night. Love ya! ~ Joey :)

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Mvptofu #1
Chapter 14: I love this story so much... thank you... can't wait for the next update \^○^/
sass_heaven
#2
Chapter 14: it might be weird but with that chapter i'm starting to ship renjun and donghyuck
2Min4CheckingUOut #3
Chapter 4: Sunny duckie you're the one who makes Mark's heart pound with immeasurable joy
2Min4CheckingUOut #4
Chapter 3: If "light my cigarette" doesn't catch on as a pickup line I'll be oddly disappointed. This story is really cute. I love the use of sarcasm
HannahMooMoo
#5
Chapter 14: Woah that was a lot to process but now I know what happened in that relationship. I really hope Renjun confronts Mark and finds out that its all a misunderstanding!!!
HannahMooMoo
#6
Chapter 13: I only found this story today and I love the direction you are taking it in. Keep it up!!
sass_heaven
#7
Chapter 13: oh gosh..justgot here and already addicted!
Mvptofu #8
Chapter 13: Thankyou for the update ❤
Mvptofu #9
Chapter 11: I just found your story and i'm so excited for the next chapter

And hope you get better soon ❤
KeepThisaSecret
#10
Chapter 11: Oh no... Mark showed up at the wrong time, but didn't stick around long enough to understand the situation. I hope he doesn't pull away from Donghyuck after this. If he wants him, he needs to man up. I have a feeling Sanha is gonna be hanging around more, causing trouble. I hope he doesn't hurt Hyuck.

Hope you feel better soon.