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Lost in the Love Lane - Teen Top OTPs One-Shot Collection

*Here's a really short one and is the last one for today, but there's more to come. Be patient with me, please 'inserts aegyo'. Thank you!

*Because I've read too much fluff I feel like writing more angst these days...

 

#5-N.A.P.

 

All it took was for him to look at the silent and unmoving shadows within his own room, and his fingers took hold of the little clock’s hands that were open for anyone to control since the glass covering it was long shattered. Slowly, he turned it to the hour his beloved died, and imagined his other half’s warm and captivating smile.

And he succeeded, his eyes squinting from the sudden loss of the light coming from the window as it let the moonbeams pass through it, followed by flashes of colors like dust playing in the wind, and still images started to form around him. A girl on a pink dress holding to a balloon of the same hue; a man pouring coffee for a businessman busy on his phone, the hot liquid floating in mid-air; and others doing their own business without caring about those that are not of use for them.

And after a few seconds of not being able to breathe, he saw the figures move, his eyes following the balloon that slipped from the girl’s hold and the sound of crying and murmurs filled his ears. And looking back to what’s in front of him, he saw the running form of his husband, alive and approaching him with sly grin on his face, forming into a bright and genuine smile that doesn’t compare to any gems discovered.

And he realized he was back to the same café where they last kissed each other, and after he was pulled into a bone-crushing hug they walked hand in hand towards the bank just across the street, and he stopped him first, whispering I love you to the other, making both their cheeks blush and their ears be tinged with a light shade of pink.

But he knows they should continue with their walk, and so they did. Reaching the bank, sitting on the same couch, and seeing his beloved’s smile once again as he waited for him to return from withdrawing from their savings account. They have already planned for this since they became a couple, and now they want to make that dream of following the summer in every country across the globe a reality.

And then it happened again.

Men clad in black suits carrying dangerous weapons with them and surrounding the panicking people started shouting profanities and forced everyone to kneel on the floor and follow everything they say. He remembered this scene, and what would occur next are still vivid in his mind, so before anyone of those men with masks covering their faces touch his husband, he approached him and hugged him tight before looking back to the bank robbers.

‘’Minsoo, what are you doing?’’

‘’Just trust me Niel.’’

His hands were pried off the shivering figure of his husband, but he just held on tighter and before he could react, he felt a bullet pierce his back, his chest collapsing making him fall on his knees.

Before everything faded into pitch black, the only thing he felt was the warm hands of Niel and the loud sobs reaching his ears making him cry as well.

==

On the same bed, the night after his husband was buried, he cried his heart out while hugging the pillow that his beloved always use. And he remembered that special gift given on their wedding day by a stranger who attended without being on the list of guests. It was something out of fantasy novels, the old clock black as midnight and could make them see what they want to experience once again.

The idea seemed crazy, but he’ll try anything.

Taking it from a blue metal box were they kept their special piece of ornaments that they don’t even wear, he did exactly what Minsoo did, turning the hands once again.

And everything repeated, except that he’s the one who said the last I love you, and he’s the one who received the rushing bullet. And again, he died, like how it was originally bound to happen, but he succeeded in lengthening his partner’s life.

But Minsoo used the clock to see him again, because of the pain of losing Niel.

And everything repeated.

There was no ending, and that one painful moment kept on repeating itself, because none of them could let go and live a life without the other.

Because they believe that they could change it, and avoid losing a piece of their heart.

But they kept on trying to change it, ‘cause losing his other half feels like not being able to live at all.

 

*And now I wonder what should I write next... a cyborg Ricky with his human keeper Changjo? a vampire Chuji and a slayer L. Joe? or an actor C.A.P. and his assistant Niel?

*Ooh, I wrote my own prompts here. Haha.

*See you all next week, silly me, of course I won't be able to see you 'cause I just type my stories, wait for my next update, okay? And forgive me, this is me not being able to eat enough for breakfast speaking.

#NAP.makes.my.heart.skip.a.beat

 

 

 

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Dear readers, I'm sorry for not being able to do an update for quite a while now, and for the requests that l wasn't able to fulfill. I still hope that you'll enjoy the future updates. Enjoy the day, lovelots.

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nickmo #1
Chapter 22: LoveIsFate #ChunJoe can u write a story bout chanhee feels when byunghun went away without telling him where he was went to
The memories around them for Chanhee POV
nickmo #2
Chapter 22: LoveIsFate #ChunJoe can u write a story bout chanhee feels when byunghun went away without telling him where he was went to
The memories around them for Chanhee POV
ItsJustSarax
#3
Chapter 22: Love is forgiving *coughchunjoecoughbasedonchunjoemeetingeachotherafterafewyearsandafterwhathappened* <- if possible lol
Angel_Ahn
#4
Chapter 21: OMG !! YOU ACTUALLY MADE IT !! THE CHAPTER 13 SEQUEL .. !! THANKS A LOT !!
shizuku
#5
Chapter 11: love is two-faced, gentle yet fierce
can you please make a sequel of this? T-T more Vampire!Changjo and Human!Ricky please? ^^
Angel_Ahn
#6
Chapter 13: Story no.13 - Love just happens, it's not planned.

Can you make a sequel for this ? I wanna know how they're going to further their secret relationship .. will Minsoo tell his wife ? They can't hide it forever .. apparently ..

I'm expecting the best from you author nim .. :)
Angel_Ahn
#7
Chapter 19: Woah .. Your writing is really no joke .. clap clap!! Thanks for the update author nim ~ ^^
Angel_Ahn
#8
Chapter 18: For me , love is remarkable ..
A feeling that once you have it, everything's went different .. everything's change .. either for better or for worse . Your mouth will never stop talking about that person, your mind kept wondering about him, and your eyes always follow everywhere he go .. your heart always beating unconditionally, and one thing that you can't hide .. your face expression .. people's in love have that certain expression

I like all fluffy and happy ending story, but .. I'm a huge lover for Angst too ..
Writing Angst doesn't mean that it'll not have happy ending .. Just make something twist like that, because If you write angst in the right way, it'll also be a good and enjoyable read .. :)

Because we will play with our emotion, crying, extremely sad, and feel hurt in our chest .. yet we can still smile at the end of the story ..

And a good writer can either make his reader smile from the fluffines or, make them cried reading the story ..

For the idea, I like cheater lover story concept .. Because the feels of hurt is always easy to express in writing .. I've read a lot , some story of the concept too .. it'll not be boring, because the feelings is strong and reader will feel hurt as same as the characters in the story are ..

And I always love second hero's character .. cuz you know, watching dramas, you'll see that every time, 1st lead hero will get his love at the end, even though the 2nd one deserves more ..

About the pairings, honestly I wanna tell you .. Niel is my bias. So, I loved all of his pairings .. but my ultimate couple is ChangNiel .. I understand your loyalty towards main couple but .. why don't you try something new ? Just suggest .. hehe .. ignore me if you can't ..

And truthfully, the first couple that I like was NielJoe, then come to ChangNiel, and Nap .. I loved them all, but mybe cuz when I read He's My Girlfriend - a ChangNiel's fanfic, I fell hard on them and I loved the way Changjo loved Niel .
Angel_Ahn
#9
Chapter 18: Don't you read my recommendation in my previous comment .. ? :(