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GENRE/S: angst, romance, yuri
MAIN CHARACTERS: tiffany, taeyeon, baekhyun, nickhyun, jessica
CHAPTER COUNT: 16 chapters
STORY DESCRIPTION: She doesn't remember the first time they met... She doesn't remember how she saved her from those bullies... She doesn't remember how they became the best of friends... She doesn't remember how her loud voice would wake her up in the morning... She doesn't remember how she would choose the strawberry flavoured ice cream over the chocolate ones... She doesn't remember her obsession with the color pink... She doesn't remember how her Korean name would always piss her off... She doesn't remember how her eye smile can always cheer her up from a bad day... She doesn't remember the moment she realized that she fell in love with her... She doesn't remember how she was broken when she introduced her new boyfriend to her... She doesn't remember how she loved her too much to the point that she almost risked her life just by saving her... She remembers everything.. except for her best friend... In short.. Kim Taeyeon doesn't remember Tiffany Hwang at all..
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when everything disappears story LINK | onedirection11 | FEB. 01, 2015
STRENGTHS:
(1) love conflicts
this might sound weird, but i love how complicated the love lines are, especially with nickhyun, baekhyun, and jessica on the edge. their appearances definitely made the story more interesting, and engaging at that, and i would love to read more about their progress in due time. nickhyun and tiffany getting together helped a lot, making things even more realistic and relateable at the same time. it's actually entertaining to see how these conflicts would affect taeyeon and tiffany's relationship. make sure to balance these conflicts next time though. you wouldn't want to overload the situation as it is. try to observe your readers' reactions as well. it'll help, you know, for constructive critici
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