☑ Pizzalover
Colloquial Mini Reviews ★ (╥﹏╥) ★ ☰ CLOSED31 STORY INFORMATION:
GENRE/S: FAMILY, ROMANCE, FLUFF
MAIN CHARACTERS: KIM HYEMI (OC), JUNGKOOK (BTS)
STATUS: on-going
CHAPTER COUNT: 11 CHAPTERS
STORY DESCRIPTION: YOU ARE KIM HYEMI, THE ONLY DAUGHTER OF THE FAMOUS COMPANY IN SOUTH KOREA, KINGZ GROUP, CURRENTLY STUDYING IN CHINA. WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN YOU AND YOUR BEST FRIEND, SONG HAE RA, CAME TO SEOUL HIGH AS AN EXCHANGE STUDENT AND MET THE PERSON YOU WANTED TO AVOID THE MOST, HIM, YOUR BROTHER? JUST THEN, ANOTHER HIM, JEON JUNGKOOK, CAME INTO YOUR LIFE. "HOW WILL THESE "HIM" SPICE UP YOUR LIFE?"
HERE ARE A FEW REMINDERS PRIOR TO THIS REVIEW. FIRST OF ALL, DON'T FORGET TO CREDIT THE SHOP -- EITHER THE SHOP OR ME, YEOLWHO05, SO AS TO ACKNOWLEDGE THE EFFORT IN PROVIDING YOU THIS REVIEW. SECONDLY, MAKE SURE TO COMMENT AFTER PICKING YOUR REVIEW. DO PROVIDE YOUR FEEDBACK, IF POSSIBLE, AS WELL. i'D LIKE TO KNOW YOUR THOUGHTS ABOUT MY REVIEW, LIKE DID I SAY SOMETHING WRONG OR SOMETHING, OR WOULD YOU LIKE TO DEFEND YOUR STORY, ETC.? I'D BE GLAD TO ANSWER THEM ALL. ^^
MEET HIM! story LINK | PIZZALOVER | JAN. 31, 2015
STRENGTHS:
(1) CLICHE STORYLINE... BUT IT'S A GOOD CLICHE
TO BE HONEST, YOUR STORY WAS A BIT CLICHE, THOUGH I FOUND IT A GOOD CLICHE NONETHELESS. I ACTUALLY LOVE STORIES WITH HEIRESS AND SUCH, AND THE TYPICAL BAD BOY IN THE PICTURE AND STUFF. ON THE OTHER HAND, ONE THING THAT I FOUND TROUBLING WITH THE CLICHE STORYLINE WAS THE SUICIDE PART. NOT ONLY WAS IT TOO CLICHE, BUT IT DIDN'T PROVE THAT MUCH EITHER. LIKE, IT SHOWS HOW WEAK HER CHARACTER IS, SEEING AS HOW SHE WAS READILY GIVING UP ON HER LIFE. IF THERE WERE MORE DETAILS TO THAT, THEN IT WOULD'VE BEEN BETTER, LIKE ELABORATING HYEMI'S FEELINGS AND SUCH, AS TO WHY SHE WANTED TO END HER LIFE AT THAT SPECIFIC DATE AND TIME, IF YOU GET WHAT I MEAN.
(2) TAEHYUNG AND HYEMI <3
WHAT PULLED ME INTO READING YOUR STORY WAS ACTUALLY BECAUSE OF TAEHYUNG AND HYEMI, BECAUSE OF THEIR LITTLE SIBLING CONFLICT. IT IS ACTUALLY RELATEABLE WITH MY LIFE RIGHT NOW, BUT ANYWAY, THEIR CONFLICT HAD MADE ME ENTICED TO THE POINT THAT I WANTED TO READ UNTIL THEY RECONCILE. I WAS GLAD WHEN THEY DID. I REALLY WAS. IN FACT, I DIDN'T CARE ABOUT JUNGKOOK AT THAT POINT. IT WAS MORE OF WHAT HAPPENS TO TAEHYUNG AND HYEMI. I KIND OF HOPED THAT THEIR CONFLICT WOULD LAST LONGER THOUGH, AS IF JUNGKOOK WOULD BE ABLE TO PLAY A BIG ROLE IN MAKING THEM RECONCILE OR SOMETHING. THAT WOULD BE A GOOD REASONING, TOO, IN CASE. ANYWAY, KUDOS TO THAT. I LOVE THEIR OH-SO-AWKWARD BOND. :)
(3) THOSE CUTE AND FUNNY SCENES
I KIND OF FOUND SOME OF THE SCENES AMUSING, AND I THINK YOUR READERS WOULD AGREE WITH THIS AS I HAVE READ THROUGH THEIR REACTIONS (VIA THE COMMENTS SECTION). ANYWAY, KEEP THEM GOING, LIKE AT LEAST PROVIDE AN ENGAGING SCENE E
Comments