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Colloquial Mini Reviews ★ (╥﹏╥) ★ ☰ CLOSED22 STORY INFORMATION:
GENRE/S: ROMANCE, DRAMA, ANGST, SLICE-OF-LIFE
MAIN CHARACTERS: EUNHAE (OC), TAO (EXO)
STATUS: ON-GOING
CHAPTER COUNT: 6 CHAPTERS
STORY DESCRIPTION: AFTER AN ATTEMPT AT SUICIDE BY JUMPING OFF A BUILDING, LEE EUNHAE IS LEFT WITH DEPRESSION, A BROKEN ARM, AND THE LOSS OF HER BEST FRIEND. SHE BEGINS TO FIND HERSELF COMPLETELY LOST, DREAMS SHATTERED, SALVATION RUINED. LIFE, AS SHE KNOWS IT, SUDDENLY BECOMES MEANINGLESS. FOLLOW THE TALE OF A YOUNG GIRL WHO'S LOST HER WILL IN THE JOURNEY TO FIND A BETTER LIFE WITH FELT FROM A GRUDGING CLASSMATE.
HERE ARE A FEW REMINDERS PRIOR TO THIS REVIEW. FIRST OF ALL, DON'T FORGET TO CREDIT THE SHOP -- EITHER THE SHOP OR ME, YEOLWHO05, SO AS TO ACKNOWLEDGE THE EFFORT IN PROVIDING YOU THIS REVIEW. SECONDLY, MAKE SURE TO COMMENT AFTER PICKING YOUR REVIEW. DO PROVIDE YOUR FEEDBACK, IF POSSIBLE, AS WELL. i'D LIKE TO KNOW YOUR THOUGHTS ABOUT MY REVIEW, LIKE DID I SAY SOMETHING WRONG OR SOMETHING, OR WOULD YOU LIKE TO DEFEND YOUR STORY, ETC.? I'D BE GLAD TO ANSWER THEM ALL. ^^
THE GLASS GHOST story LINK | INSPIRIT_CHAN | JAN. 22, 2015
STRENGTHS:
(1) THE THEME OF THE STORY
TO BE HONEST, WHAT MADE ME LIKE THE STORY WAS THE TOPIC ON HAND, TO WHICH YOU TALKED ABOUT SUICIDE AND WHATNOT. IT'S A VERY SENSITIVE TOPIC, AND NOT MOST WRITERS COULD TOP IT OFF LIKE YOU DID. I LIKED HOW YOU DEPICTED THE THEME OF THE STORY WELL WITH THE STRUGGLING PROTAGONIST, AND I DO HOPE THAT IT GETS MORE DEEPER IN YOUR NEXT UPDATES.
(2) WELL-DONE CHARACTERIZATION
I REALLY LIKED HOW YOU CHARACTERIZED YOUR CHARACTERS, ESPECIALLY WITH EUNHAE BEING THE SUICIDAL GIRL AND TAO BEING THE HELPFUL GUY IN THE STORY. THEY HAD DISTINCT CHARACTERISTICS AND ALL, INCLUDING THE SIDE CHARACTERS THAT YOU HAD MENTIONED ALONG, AND I DID FEEL THEM DEVELOPING GRADUALLY ALONG WITH THE FLOW OF THE STORY PERFECTLY.
ON ANOTHER NOTE, I WAS KIND OF CONFUSED WITH THE PRINCIPAL. TECHNICALLY, I DON'T KNOW IF PRINCIPALS ASSIGN CASES LIKE THAT TO THEIR STUDENTS AND ALL, SINCE THAT WOULD BE THE JOB OF THE SCHOOL'S GUIDANCE COUNSELOR, OR MAYBE THE DISCIPLINE OFFICER. NEVERTHELESS, IT WAS A BIT WEIRD TO ASSIGN HEAVY CASES LIKE THAT TO THEIR STUDENTS, SINCE IT WOULD PRIMARILY BE WEIRD ON THEIR PART TO TRUST THEIR STUDENTS THAT EASILY. I MEAN, IT JUST FEELS UTTERLY SURREAL ON MY PART. IT WOULD'VE BEEN BETTER IF THEY GAVE A CLEARER REASON AS TO WHY THEY CHOSE TAO RATHER THAN HIM BEING THE LAST ONE ON THE LIST.
MOREOVER, HOW MANY ARE EVEN THERE ON THE LIST, THAT TAO HAD JUST HAPPENED TO BE THE LAST ONE? HOW IS IT, THAT EUNHAE'S CASE -- WHICH ON MY OPINION, SEEMS HEAVIER THAN MOST -- HAPPENED TO BE THE LAST ONE WITHOUT A MENTOR. IT JUST SEEMS TOO WEIRD AND COINCIDENTAL FOR MY LIKING, IF YOU GET WHAT I MEAN.
"You are the only one," Misook says quietly. "We have consulted many other students, ones whose chances to agree are more favorable than yours, but they all have so
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